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IELTS writing exam Question: The government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help a country make progress and develop. To what extant do you agree or disagree? It cannot deny how the importance of science exerting on our life and promoting the whole world to make a big change. However, it doesn’t mean government should put more money on science education instead of other subjects. Nowadays, the explanation of every thing happening and the development of the society seem to based on the science, such as, black hole, colony, and aliens etc. Science is a basic subject and covers a variety of side, such as, math, physics, chemistry and biology, and a method to analyze and solve the problem. It has to admit that the earlier the students to exposure the science, the more prefect thinking and concepts to think about the issues. Although the progress of the country needs the students who equipped with science from school, at the meanwhile, it also needs the talents who are good at other aspects. As we know, in 21st century, technology changes human’s life style and bring us into a totally new world. In addition, with the development of globalization, the cooperation and culture exchange are getting more frequently, students not only to study culture, economy, politics, but also the language. Whatever how the country is developing, young people should not to forget the history. More importantly, the strong and healthy youngsters are the hope and future of a nation, so government should spend money on building gym, swimming pool, basketball court and other facilities for them to do more exercise. Hence I believe it is necessary to government to support school for teaching every subject by fiance, and let the student to choose which subject they are most interest in learning. To short, in order to develop and improve the country, government has the responsibility to not only invest money on science, but also other subjects.

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IELTS writing exam

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The government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help a country make progress and develop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


It (I? ) 你这里用"it"是指谁?cannot deny how the importance that science exerts on our life and how it promotes promoting the whole world to make a big change (你是要说 “科学” 可以改变世界吗?). However, it doesn’t mean the government should put more money on science education instead of other subjects.

Nowadays the explanation behind how everything happens every thing happening and the development of the society society's progress seem to based on the sciences , such as, the study of black holes, colonies, and aliens etc (这句话可以用中文吗?不太清楚). Science is a basic subject and covers a variety of side (side 是指?), such as, math, physics, chemistry and biology, and a method to analyze and solve the problem. It has to admit that the earlier the students to exposure the science, the more prefect thinking and concepts to think about the issues (这句话一定要你用中文解释,不理解)

Although the progress of the country needs the students who equipped with science from school, at the meanwhile, it also needs the talents who are good at other aspects. A country's progress certainly needs students who are equipped with knowledge of science, but it also needs talents in other areas. As we know, In the 21st century, technology changes human’s our life style and has brought us into an entirely new world. bring us into a totally new world. In addition, with the development of globalization, the cooperation and cultural exchange are becoming more frequent. Students not only to study culture, economy, politics, but also the language. However how the country is developing, young people should not to forget the history.

More importantly, the strong and healthy youngsters are the hope and future of a nation so government should spend money on building gyms, swimming pools, basketball courts and other facilities for them to do more exercise. Hence I believe it is necessary for the government to support school for teaching every subject by fiance (这里不懂), and let the student to choose which subject they are most interest in learning.

To short (In summary, in order to develop and improve the country, the government has the responsibility to not only invest money on science, but also other subjects.

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