Scientific writing is so difficult, I don't know how to choose appropriate words.
Background and Purpose – Cerebral microbleeds (CMBs) are radiological defined lesions, being wildly found among hemorrhagic and ischemic stroke patients. Based on previous studies, hypertensive cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD) and cerebral amyloid angiopathy (CAA) are common etiologies of CMBs, and strictly lobar CMBs strongly predict CAA while deep and mixed CMBs are associated with hypertensive CSVD. Although cerebral microbleeds are generally-accepted radiological markers of cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD), some famous cohort studies, such as Framingham study, Rotterdam study and AGES-Reykjavik study, found out that these “silent” lesions were also frequently seen in the general elderly population. However, Chinese cohort study is absent. In order to identify the prevalence and risk factors of CMBs among general Chinese rural population, this research was conducted.
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Scientific writing is so difficult, I don't know how to choose appropriate words.
Background and Purpose – Cerebral microbleeds (CMBs) are radiologically defined lesions, being widely wildly found among hemorrhagic and ischemic stroke patients. Based on previous studies, hypertensive cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD) and cerebral amyloid angiopathy (CAA) are common etiologies of CMBs, and strictly lobar CMBs strongly predict CAA while deep and mixed CMBs are associated with hypertensive CSVD. Although cerebral microbleeds are generally-accepted radiological markers of cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD), some famous cohort studies, such as the Framingham study, the Rotterdam study and the AGES-Reykjavik study, found out that these “silent” lesions were also frequently seen in the general elderly population. However, a Chinese cohort study is absent. This researchy was conducted in order to identify the prevalence and risk factors of CMBs among general Chinese rural populations. this research was conducted.
I'm not sure what you mean by 'general'. Perhaps it should be 'random'?
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Scientific writing is so difficult, I don't know how to choose appropriate words.
Background and Purpose – Cerebral microbleeds (CMBs) are radiologically defined lesions, being widely found among hemorrhagic and ischemic stroke patients. Based on previous studies, hypertensive cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD) and cerebral amyloid angiopathy (CAA) are common etiologies of CMBs., and Strictly lobar CMBs strongly predict CAA while deep and mixed CMBs are associated with hypertensive CSVD. (original sentence too long and so difficult to read) Although cerebral microbleeds are generally accepted radiological markers of cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD), some famous large cohort studies, such as the Framingham study, the Rotterdam study and the AGES-Reykjavik study, found out identified that these “silent” lesions were also frequently seen in the general elderly population. However, a similar Chinese cohort study is absent does not exist. In order to identify the prevalence and risk factors of CMBs among within the general Chinese rural population, this research a cross sectional?/prospective?/retrospective? study was conducted. (better to state the study design)
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Scientific writing is so difficult, I don't know how to choose the appropriate words.
Background and Purpose – Cerebral micro-bleeds (CMBs) are radiological defined lesions, being widely found among hemorrhagic and ischemic stroke patients. Based on previous studies, hypertensive cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD) and cerebral amyloid angiopathy (CAA) are common etiologies* of CMBs, and strictly lobar CMBs strongly predict CAA while deep and mixed CMBs are associated with hypertensive CSVD. Although cerebral micro-bleeds are generally-accepted radiological markers of cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD), some famous cohort studies, such as the Framingham study, Rotterdam study and AGES-Reykjavik study, found out that these “silent” lesions were also frequently seen in the general elderly population. However, a Chinese cohort study is absent. In order to identify the prevalence and risk factors of CMBs among the general Chinese rural population, this research was conducted.*or, causes
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