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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. do u agree or disagree ? i agree spend money on railways rather than road. because railways is much safer and faster than road, and it can also centralized to control, we dont need to worry about the crowd, it is much faster than before, we have the high - speed rail. u know, sometimes we have the bad traffic, traffic jam, and if we want to go across the road we need to wait the traffic lights, it is much convinent from one place to another place, and if most of people choose railways than road. and choose railways can also reduce the environment pollution, save the energy, the most importment is choose the railways can reduce the traffic accident, some of the male and female drivers drink wine before driving the car, some of the drivers and pedestrians not allowed the traffic rules. and some drivers drived fast on the road only want to seek the stimulus, So it is very dangerous and easy to get the accidents. So, i agree spend money on railways rather than roads.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. Do u agree or disagree ?

I agree governments  should spend money on railways rather than roads.Because railways are much safer and faster than roads, and it can also be centralized. With railways we don't need to worry about the crowds, it is much faster than roads because we have the high - speed railway. You know, sometimes we have the bad traffic and traffic jam, and if we want to go across the road we need to wait for the traffic lights.

It is much more convenient to go from one place to another place, and if most of the people choose railways rather than roads. And by choosing railways we can also reduce the environmental pollution, save the energy and the most important is choose the railways can reduce the traffic accidents.Some of the male and female drivers drink wine before driving their car.Some of the drivers and pedestrians do not follow the traffic rules and some drivers drive fast on the road only want to seek the stimulus. So it is very dangerous and easy to get accidents.

So  In conclusion, I agree for railways instead of roads.

Nice persuasive writing although should list the positives and negatives of both sides of the arguments like although roads are - - - - they are also - - - -.

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