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First Day Today is my first day in italki ，I fell so excellent that I could have friends from others countries ，I am a senior student but I can't writing and specking English well，I need your help ，Then you teach me English and I teach you Chinese ,Do you think that better?or you have some advice say to me ,come! ,

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First Day

Today is my first day on (1) Italki. I feel(2) so excellent because I can make friends from others(3)countries. I am a senior student but I can't writing and speaking(4) English well. I need your help. Then, you teach me English and I teach you Chinese. Do you think know that better? If (6) you know something better (5) or If (6) you have some advice, say to me advise me (7), come!


Justifications:


1) Use always "on" in internet contexts;

2) feel: sense; fell: p.p. of fall;

3) Others is a pronoun and other is a noun;

4) speaking

5) This is a correct expression;

6) Conditional

6) advice: suggestion; advise: give a advice


I'm not a English native speaker but I hope this helps.


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First Day

Today is my first day in on italki. I fell so excellent am glad that I can have friends from others countries. I am a senior great student but I
can't writing and specking write or speak English well. I need your help. Then You can teach me English and I can teach you Chinese.  Do you think that better? If you know anything better or you have some advice say to for me ,come please tell me!

Make sure to use a . (period) as punctuation after every sentence. You could also use a ! (exclamation point) or a ? (question mark) depending on the sentence.

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