Things that make me and my friend happy
I feel happy when I can travel. I love traveling but I only visit European countries. I was in Spain, Croatia, Germany, the Czech Republic, Italy and Slovakia. I really love languages. I speak Spanish fluently and I learn English and Japanese. I cook or tidy up my house to relax. I like going out with my dog. We walk every day. I like running and doing exercise. It make me happy. My friend Peter likes mountains. He really loves climbing but i don't like see it because it is very dangerous. He likes also cycling. He likes traveling so we often travel together. Peter is happy when he has success in his job.
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Things that make me and my friend happy
I feel happy when I can travel. I love traveling but I only visit European countries. I was in Spain, Croatia, Germany, the Czech Republic, Italy and Slovakia. I really love languages. I speak Spanish fluently and I am learning English and Japanese. I cook or tidy up my house to relax. I like going out with my dog. We walk every day. I like running and exercising. It makes me happy. My friend Peter likes mountains. He really loves climbing but i don't like see it because it is very dangerous. He also likes cycling. He likes traveling so we often travel together. Peter is happy when he's doing well at work.I have underlined and put things in italics that I've changed. There's nothing really wrong with what's being said, but there's ways you can make it appear more natural. As an example: I cook or tidy up my house to relax, and I really like going out with my dog. We walk every day. I like running and exercising because It makes me happy. The sentence has more flow because you're using and and because to connect both ideas. You've done great however.
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Things that make me and my friend happy
I feel happy when I'm able to I can travel. I love traveling but I have only visited European countries. I've been to I was in Spain, Croatia, Germany, the Czech Republic, Italy and Slovakia. I really love languages. I speak Spanish fluently and I'm learning I learn English and Japanese. I cook or tidy up my house to relax. I like going out with my dog. We walk every day. I like running and doing exercise. It makes me happy. My friend Peter likes the mountains. He really loves climbing but i don't like to watch him see it because it is very dangerous. He also likes also cycling. He likes traveling too so we often travel together. Peter is happy when he is has successful in his job.Want to progress faster?
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