Underground 3
I could hear a faint sound under me, in the bottom of the gallery, like something moving itself from one place to another. I was terrified and my muscles were tense, I noticed that I was holding tightly the rungs of the ladder. Despite the fear I started down, as I had no more options. I got to the ground and suddenly I remembered I had my mobile phone in my pocket. I could feel the sound every moment closer to me. I I picked up the phone and quickly opened it and turned on the flashlight...What?...what? that can't be happening, this is a nightmare!!
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Underground 3
I could hear a faint sound under me, in the bottom of the gallery, like something moving itself from one place to another. I was terrified and my muscles were tense, I noticed that I was holding tightly the rungs of the ladder tightly. Despite the my fear I started down, as I had no other more options. I got to the ground and suddenly I remembered that I had my mobile phone in my pocket. I could feel the sound getting progressively every moment closer to me. I picked up the phone and quickly opened it and turned on the flashlight...What?...what? that can't be happening, this is a nightmare!!1
Underground 3
I could hear a faint sound under me, in the bottom of the gallery, like something moving itself from one place to another. I was terrified and my muscles were tense, I noticed that I was holding tightly the rungs of the ladder tightly. Despite the fear, I started down as I had no more other options. I got to the ground and suddenly I remembered I had my mobile phone in my pocket. I could feel the sound every moment closer to me (I could feel the sound getting closer to me every moment). I I picked up the phone and quickly opened it and turned on the flashlight...What?...what? That can't be happening, this is a nightmare!!0
Underground 3
I could hear a faint sound under me, in the bottom of the gallery, like something moving itself from one place to another. I was terrified and my muscles were tense, I noticed that I was holding tightly the rungs of the ladder. Despite the fear I started down, as I had no more options. I got to the ground and suddenly I remembered I had my mobile phone in my pocket. I could feel the sound every moment closer to me. I I picked up the phone and quickly opened it and turned on the flashlight...What?...what? that can't be happening, this is a nightmare!!0
Hi, Micheal. My objective is to learn the language. This is why I write here, and that's because I write in this way, I suppose It's not a literary style. But I prefer someone to help me with my mistakes, as I do when I correct other's texts.
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I could hear the faint movement below, it felt as if someone or something was racing across the gallery. Terrified, I struggled to force my body down the ladder. I had no other option, I had to climb to see what it was and it struck me...My Phone! I took it out of my pocket and battled my fear as the faint sound was now raging towards me like a wild animal towards it's prey, I build up the courage to turn on my phone's flashlight only to be blinded by the sight that had beheld itself. Frozen, only one thing crossed my mind'This has to be a dream...' I hope that its better, I am no pro XP
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