My first note!

Hi! My name is Natalia and I'm from Argentina. I think that my English is not too much good but i will try (try what?*). I've always wanted learn English. Usually, It was my favourite subject in my school. Someday, i want travel to others country like United States and England, because I'm very interested in other cultures**. I really like the american accent. I hope to, someday, speak and use this idioms like them. Thank you very much for reading my first note and the corrections. Good luck everyone!

Notes:

* "...but I will try"--you need to specify what you'll try, you could say, "...but I will try to improve"
**It'd be better if you said it like this,  "I wish to travel to other countries like the United States and England someday, because I'm very interested in foreign cultures."
Here, I've used the word 'foreign' instead of 'other' because using the same word (other) in one sentence just looks a little awkward. But it's not wrong, and natives make this mistake too so it's no big deal.

My first note!

Hi! My name is Natalia and i'm from Argentina. I think that my english is not too much good but i will try. I always wanted to learn English. Usually, that was my favourite subject in my school. Someday, i want travel to others countries like United States and England, because i'm very interesed in other cultures. I really like the american accent. I hope someday i'll speak and use this language like they do. Thank you very much for reading my first note and correcting. Good luck everyone!

My first note!

Hi! My name is Natalia and I'm from Argentina. I don't think that my English is very good but I will try. I have always wanted to learn English and this was usually my favourite subject in school. Someday, I want travel to other countries like the United States and England because I'm very interested in foreign cultures. I really like the American accent; I hope that one day I can speak and use idioms like them! Thank you very much for reading my first note and checking for corrections. Good luck everyone!