Health problems part 2
If you have a health problem, the first thing that you should do is go to a doctor, but if you can't go, the best thing to do is to stay sleeping at home and take any pill that can help you.
These disease can be very dangerous and deadly. Normally hide in other health problems, for example:
stroke or hear attack can hide in a simple migraine, also health problems such as high bood pressure can hide disease such as diabetes or other disease that can kill you.
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Health problems part 2
If you have a health problem, the first thing that you should do is go to a doctor, but if you can't go, the next best thing to do is to rest at home stay sleeping at home and take a specific medication/pill any pill that can help you.These disease (you have not previous talked about any disease previously in the text so here you can't say "these diseases" at this stage) Some diseases can be very dangerous and deadly. Normally they masquerade as/can be disguised as/appear as hide in common symptoms other health problems, for example:
Strokes or hear attacks can hide in appear as a simple migraine, also health problems such as another example is high blood pressure can hide disease which could be a symptom of something more serious such as diabetes or other diseases that can could kill you.
Saying "hide" as you've written is ok English but I think it sounds more natural using "masquerade as/can be disguised as/appear as"
Good entry, I hope this helps
correct me, please.
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