Past memories
Today, I was checking my messages on Facebook that were from a long time . I remembered old friends and so close for me. I left and blocked one and the other blocked me . The one who blocked me ,he loved me so much in the past . I unblocked this one and sent a message to him .And he opened it ,replied quickly and he was so happy for remembering him.But I am not feeling good ,as when I talk to him, i feel something break my heart .I remember this guy. who taught me THE LOVE ,then he disappeared.I hate him so much and I can't sleep now .It's 1:48 AM :(((((
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Past memories
Today, I was checking my messages on Facebook that were from a long time ago. I remembered old friends and so who were close to for me. I left and blocked one and the other blocked me . The one who blocked me ,he loved me so much in the past . I unblocked this one and sent a message to him .And he opened it ,replied quickly and he was so happy that I remembered for remembering him.But I do/did not feel am not feeling good ,as when I talked to him, i feel felt my heart break something break my heart .I remember this guy. who taught me THE LOVE , and then he disappeared.I hate him so much and I can't sleep now .It's 1:48 AM :(((((Do not use a space before a period or comma. Use one space after a period or comma.
"Long time" -> "long time ago"
"I was happy for ..." -> "I was happy that ..."
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I won't add any corrections because Tam's corrections were very good.
I hope you're feeling better now! You cannot choose where love comes from, and the people you love are not always the people who love you. However, when you love someone who loves you, your life will always be beautiful and you will have a moon in your dark sky.
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I know .it's not in French.I made a mistake.
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