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A letter about a party I would like to do Dear Sir I am writing to you about an advertisement for Big Sounds Disco that I have found on the newspaper. I have some questions that I would like to ask you. I would like to celebrate my birthday the 9 th of July between 8.30 - 12.00, that would fix you? I woul like to bookthe large private room in the Ambrose hotel. We are probably around 40 people, I know we are not many but I want to have a lor of space for dancing, as I really like dancing, and my guests too. I would like to do my own disc because I have some special songs that I woul like to put in the party, but I dont think I will have enough for all the night so I am interested in the pop and comercial songs. I will give the dj the disc so dont worry abour it. Another thing I would really like in my party is a dancing competition. As I said we love dancing so that would be really good and fun too. Some guests are really good dancers, you will see if you are there. The last question is: how much would the party cost? Yours faithfully

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A letter about a party I would like to do

Dear Sir

I am writing to you about an advertisement for Big Sounds Disco that I have found/saw/read in the newspaper. I have some questions that I would like to ask you. I would like to celebrate my birthday on the 9 th of July between 8.30 - 12.00. Would that date suit that would fix you?

I would like to book the large private room in the Ambrose Hotel. We are There will probably be around 40 people, I know that there are not many guests, we are not many but I want to have a lor of space for dancing, as I really like dancing, and my guests do too. I would like to have  do my own disco because I have some special songs that I woul like to play during  put in the party, but I don't think I will have enough music for all the whole night, so I am interested in the pop and commercial songs too. I will give the dj the disc so dont worry about it.

 

So, what you are trying to say is that you want a DJ, but he will be asked to play your special songs too.

Another thing I would really like in my party is a dancing competition. As I said we love dancing so that would be really good and fun too. Some guests are really good dancers, you will see if you are there.

The last question is: how much would the party cost?

Yours faithfully

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