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about me hello ,everyone,i'm min li,,i'm from China.i want to learn english.so i come here..since yesterday ,i meet three friends.i'm very happy. My daughter says to me :"come on ,mum." l love her. i think i will work hard forever.

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About me

Hello ,everyone, I'm Min Li(you can say also My name is Min Li),I'm from China.I want to learn English.so I come here..since yesterday  So yesterday I decided to make an account here or yesterday I joined this site. ,I made three friends here.I'm very happy. My daughter says to me :"Come on ,mum." l love her.I think I will work hard forever.(you have to tell the reason why you will work forever otherwise your sentence it is not correct.

pay much more attetion it is I and not i

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About me

Hello everyone,  There's no " comma" between Hello and everyone

I'm Min Li. We have no "i" in English. Please write : "I" 

I'm from China.

I want to learn English so Icome here.

Since yesterday, I have talked with  three friends. The fact that you didn't meet them. You only chatted with them, right? 

I'm very happy. My daughter says to me :"Come on, mum." l love her.

I think i will work hard forever  =>>> The question is What do you work hard forever for? You must write more sentences to explain for this  

Such a cute entry Muyilimin! Keep practicing writing. Your English will be improved. 

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