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log:27 May Today is Friday,my favorite day!! Friday is the end of weekday, and it means that I can set my daunting homework aside and have a ball. It seems like a tradition that I watch entertaining programs on Friday night and then stay up.I am used to sleeping in on Saturday. From time to time,I spend my weekend at home,having a quality time with my family. My biggest creation is reading,which can give me a lot of inspiration and let my hair down.I am keen on detective novels,especially ones written by Higashino Keigo,a Japanese writer. His bestseller-White Night-is a page turner.It has around 500 pages but I finished reading in a day!! However,I am a timid person, so I just read 1-2 detective novels a month and avoid reading them before going to bed, in case of nightmare!! Comic book is fantastic,too. My dear friends,if you open my notebook accidentally can stand with my boring diary (actually I think what I've written seems like the essay from a pupil..lol),I strongly recommend Silver Spoon,a comic from Japan. The theme is the life in an agricultural high school in Hokkaido. I've learnt some interesting knowledge about farming industry and food producing from it. My life in high school was stressful,due to intensive examinations and tons of homework and this may be the reason why I appreciate their school life,which is mind-opening and hilarious.For example,students in Silver Spoon make cheese,bacon and pizza on their own,and they even give birth to a baby cow.(Sorry,spoiler.) I gonna to watch Running Man,the most popular program,tonight.It comes from Korea,but China bought the copyright,and therefore we can see the Chinese version on TV.Every week,there are at least 7 stars and they play funny games.Sometimes,they cooperate to achieve a goal;sometimes,they compete with each other to get the final honor.I think it is very down-to-earth,and more importantly,I am fond of one of the host. Albeit I signed up for iTalki only two days ago, I find I like it so much!! I decide to write an English diary on a daily basis and do my utmost use as much as expressions I know. It may be a way to inspire my potential and prepare for my coming academic life.I'm so glad to meet so many driven and friendly pals who chat with my or correct my errors in writing.With their help,I try to step out of my comfort zone.

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log:27 May

Today is Friday, my favorite day!!

Friday is the end of the weekday, and it means that I can set my (daunting) homework aside, and enjoy myself/have a ball. It seems like a tradition that I watch entertaining programs on Friday night, and then stay up late.  I am used to sleeping in on Saturday. From time to time, I spend my weekend at home, having a quality time with my family.

My biggest/interest creation is reading, which can give me a lot of inspiration, and helps me relax [let my hair down*]. I am keen on detective novels, especially ones written by Higashino Keigo, a Japanese writer. His bestseller White Night is a page turner. It has around 500 pages, but I finished reading it in a day!!  However, I am a timid person, so I just read 1-2 detective novels a month, and avoid reading them before going to bed, in case of nightmares!!       *not the right expression here

Comic books is are fantastic,too. My dear friends, if you have opened my notebook accidentally, can you bear to read/[stand] with my boring diary (actually, I think what I've written seems like the essay from of a pupil..lol), I strongly recommend Silver Spoon, a comic from Japan. The theme is the life in an agricultural high school in Hokkaido. I've learnt some interesting things/knowledge about (the) farming (industry) and the food produceding (from it). My life in high school was stressful, due to intensive examinations and tons of homework, and this may be [the reason that]/why I appreciate their school life, which is mind-opening and hilarious.  For example, students in Silver Spoon make cheese, bacon and pizza on their own, and they even [*give birth to]/deliver a baby cow.(Sorry,spoiler.)

* 'they . . give birth to . . '  means the baby cow [calf] comes from themselves [their own baby] !


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Log: May 27th

Today Is Friday, My Favorite Day!!

Friday is the last weekday, and it means that I can set my daunting homework aside and have some fun. It seems like a personal tradition that I watch entertainment shows on Friday night and then stay up.I am used to sleeping in on Saturday. From time to time, I spend my weekend at home, having_quality time with my family.

My main recreation is reading, which can give me a lot of inspiration and let my **imagination soar. I am keen on detective novels, especially the ones written by Higashino Keigo, a Japanese writer. His bestseller, White Night is a page turner.It  is around 500 pages long, but I finished reading it in a day!! However, I am a timid person, so I just read 1-2 detective novels a month and avoid reading them before going to bed, in case of nightmare!!

Comic books are fantastic, too. My dear friends, if you open my notebook accidentally, you can come across my boring diary (actually, I think what I've written seems like the essay from a pupil..lol). I strongly recommend Silver Spoon,a comic from Japan. It is about life in an agricultural high school in Hokkaido. I've learnt some interesting facts about the farming industry and food producing from it. My life in high school was stressful, due to intensive examinations and tons of homework and this may be the reason why I appreciate their school life, which is open-minded and hilarious. For example, students in Silver Spoon make cheese, bacon and pizza on their own, and they even helped a calf be born. (Sorry,spoiler.)

I'm gonna_watch Running Man, the most popular show tonight. It comes from Korea, but China bought the copyright, and therefore we can see the Chinese version on TV. Every week, there are at least 7 stars and they play funny games. Sometimes, they cooperate to achieve a goal; sometimes, they compete with each other to get the final prize. I think it is very down-to-earth, and more importantly, I am fond of one of the hosts.

Although I signed up for iTalki only two days ago, I already like it so much!! I've decided to write a post in English on a daily basis and_use as many of the expressions I know as possible. It may be a way to inspire my potential and prepare for my coming academic life. I'm so glad to meet so many driven and friendly pals who chat with me or correct my errors in writing. With their help, I'll try to step out of my comfort zone. :)

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log:27 May

Today is Friday,my favorite day!!

Friday is the end of weekday, and it means that I can set my daunting homework aside and have a ball. It seems like a habit that I watch entertaining programs on Friday night and then stay up.I am used to sleeping in on Saturday. From time to time ,I spend my weekend having a quality time with my family  at home.

My biggest creation is reading,which can give me a lot of inspiration and let my hair down.I am keen on detective novels,especially those written by Higashino Keigo,a Japanese writer. His bestseller-White Night-is a page turner.It has around 500 pages but I finished reading in a day!! However,I am a timid person, so I just read 1-2 detective novels a month and avoid reading them before going to bed, in case of nightmare!!

Comic book is fantastic, too. My dear friends,if you open my notebook accidentally you will stand with my boring diary (actually I think what I've written seems like the essay from a pupil..lol),I strongly recommend Silver Spoon,a comic from Japan. The theme is the life in an agricultural high school in Hokkaido. I've learnt some interesting knowledge about farming industry and food producing from it. My life in high school was stressful,due to intensive examinations and tons of homework and this may be the reason why I appreciate their school life,which is mind-opening and hilarious.For example,students in Silver Spoon make cheese,bacon and pizza on their own,and they even give birth to a baby cow.(Sorry,spoiler.)

I gonna to watch Running Man,the most popular program,tonight.It came from Korea,but Chinese tv station bought the copyright, therefore we can see the Chinese version on TV.Every week,there are at least 7 stars and they play funny games.Sometimes,they cooperate to achieve a goal;sometimes,they compete with each other to get the final honor.I think it is very down-to-earth,and more importantly,I am fond of one of the host.

Albeit I signed up for iTalki only two days ago, I find I like it so much!! I decide to write an English diary on a daily basis and do my utmost use as many as expressions I know. It may be a way to inspire my potential and prepare for my coming academic life.I'm so glad to meet so many driven and friendly pals who chat with me or correct my errors in writing.With their help,I try to step out of my comfortable zone.


哇~~看的好累,有些词和短语都没见用过,也不知道用的合不合适,还是请母语人士看看吧

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log:27 May

Today is Friday, my favorite day!!

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I am going gonna to watch Running Man, the most popular program, tonight.  It comes from Korea, but China bought the copyright, and therefore we can see the Chinese version on TV.  Every week, there are at least 7 stars, and they play funny games.  Sometimes, they cooperate to achieve a goal;  sometimes, they compete with each other to get the final honour.  I think it is very down-to-earth, and more importantly, I am fond of one of the hosts.

Albeit/Although I signed up for iTalki only two days ago, I find I like it so much!!  I have decided to write an English diary on a daily basis, and do my best/utmost to use as many much as expressions as I can/know. It may be a way to inspire myself/my potential, and prepare for (my coming) academic life.  I'm so glad to meet so many driven and friendly pals, who chat with me, my or correct my errors in writing.  With their help, I am trying to step out of my comfort zone.

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TGIF. HAHA. Hi, there. ur article is good. I'm a lover of english n I work in Africa handling some projects now. Could I add u on Skype? By the way, my nationality is China. Beijing. haha

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