The happiness formula, second part
On one hand, in my opinion the life is very short to waste all of our time preparing the day after. Obviously we have to feel safe and we have to prepare us for the future, but it can´t be the goal of our entire life. We have to find the balance the present time between the future times. Childhood go by, if we don´t play in that moment we aren´t able to play with them. When we are adults we only have a few years to play with our sons, to read them a tale or simply laugh together, later they grow. On the second hand, I think we don´t need too much money to be happy. We don´t need a fast car or change it every four years to get every places, in fact we can´t exceed ward-speed, a cheaper car can be drive us at every places too.
We need more free time to doing the things make us feel happy, stay with our family and friends. We need time to travel, time to see other places and time to know other people, because nobody can be sure one hundred per cent that there is another life after this.
I would be very grateful if someone could correct this writing. Thank you.
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The happiness formula, second part
On one hand, in my opinion the life is very short to waste all of our time preparing for the day after. Obviously we have to feel safe and we have to prepare us for the future, but it can´t be the goal of our entire life. We have to find the balance, the present time between the future times. Childhood go by, if we don´t play in that moment we aren´t able to play with them. When we are adults we only have a few years to play with our sons, to read them a tale or simply laugh together, later they grow. On the second hand, I think we don´t need too much money to be happy. We don´t need a fast car or to change it every four years to get to every places, in fact we can´t exceed ward-speed, a cheaper car can be drive us at to every places too.We need more free time to doing the things that make us feel happy, like staying with our family and friends. We need time to travel, time to see other places and time get to know other people, because nobody can be sure one hundred per cent that there is another life after this.
I would be very grateful if someone could correct this writing. Thank you.
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