Happy Birthday to my father!
Today my beloved dad got 70 years old! He is thin, strong and full of life energy. His favorite things to do are cyckling, growning crops and flowers, also he likes watching TV and reading poems and even drawning. The most good thing I like in his character is that he never complains and it is rare to see him in angry mood. :D So, today we will be celebrate his Birthday with all our family at home an open air. We are going to make BBQ and a lot of fresh salads, cake with one big candle in shape of number 70 and shampaign. It will be super day! Happy Birthday, dad!
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Happy Birthday to my father!
Today, my beloved dad got turned 70 years old! He is thin, strong and full of life energy (or, 'full of life'). His favorite things to do are; cycling, growing crops and flowers (or simply, 'gardening'), also he likes watching TV and reading poems, and even drawing. The best most good thing I like in his character, is that he never complains, and it is rare to see him in angry mood. :D So, today, we will be celebrate his birthday with all our family members at home, in the an open air. We are going to have make BBQ and a lot of fresh salads, along with a cake with one big candle, in the shape of the number 70 and champagne shampaign. It will be a super day! Happy Birthday, dad!
Lovely write up, with only a few errors. Also, nice to see that you are having such a lavish celebration for your father! A very happy birthday to your dad! =)
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Happy Birthday to my father!
Today my beloved dad turned 70 years old! He is thin, strong and full of life. His favorite things to do are cycling, growing crops and flowers and he also likes watching TV and reading poems and even drawing. The most good thing I like most about his character is that he never complains and it is rare to see him in angry mood. :D So, today we will be celebrate his Birthday with all our family at home in the open air. We are going to have a BBQ and a lot of fresh salad and cake with one big candle in the shape of the number 70 and champagne. It will be a super day! Happy Birthday, dad!Sounds like you're going to have a great day ^_^
Well written piece! Just be careful of your definite articles (the shape, the open air etc - https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/determiners-and-quantifiers/definite-article - for more help)
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Have nice time!
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