A private conversation
Last week i went to the theater,I had a very good seat,The play was very interesting.I did not enjoy it .A young man and a young woman were sitting behind me. They were talking loudly .I could not hear the actors, I got up very angry. I turned round ,I looked at the man and the woman angrily .They did not pay any attention. In the end , I could not the bear it ,I turned round again."I can't hear a word" i said angrily."It's none of your business " the young man said rudely, This is private conversation
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A private conversation
Last week I went to the theatre and I had a very good seat. The movie was very interesting but I could not enjoy it because ofA young man and a young woman a young couple . They sat behind me and they talked loudly .That's why I could not listen to the actors and not understand what that movie was talking about so I was very angry with them. I turned around ,I looked at the man and the woman angrily .They did not pay attention to the movie. They continued talking to each other and did not care about the feeling of people around them. In the end , I could not bear them ,I turned around again and I said " Shut up please! I can not watch this movie because of you. You speak too loudly and it is difficult for me to listen to the actors". However, he told me that it was none of my business. That was so rude and I felt disappointed about him.Just make reference to my correction ^^
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A private conversation
Last week, I went to the theatre and I had a very good seat. The play was very interesting. I did could not enjoy it because a young man and a young woman were sitting behind me and They were talking loudly. I could not hear the actors, I got up very angry. I turned around, I looked at the man and the woman, angrily. They did not pay any attention. In the end, I could not the bear it, I turned around again. "I can't hear a word", I said, angrily. "It's none of your business ", the young man said rudely. This is private conversation
Great write up, only a few minor errors. Keep practicing! =)
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Dear Belinda, I can't help noticing that this passpage is from a text book. If you want to improve your writing, you should write something of your own. Just my advice :)
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