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我的每天! 我每天早上9点起床, 先洗澡, 然后运动一个小时. 10点半到11点喝绿茶, 然后直到14点我学习汉语. 14点到15点吃午饭, 以后有时侯我出门跟一起 朋友, 有时侯我学习汉语直到19点. 20点到21点吃晚饭, 然后我看电视或者出门跟一起nu朋友. Please remember that I can't really read Mandarin yet! If there's something wrong, please, use English or Italian :).

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我的每天!

我每天早上9点起床, 先洗澡, 然后运动一个小时. 10点半到11点喝绿茶, 然后直到14点我学习汉语. 14点到15点吃午饭, 以后有时侯我出门跟一起 朋友, 有时侯我学习汉语直到19点. 20点到21点吃晚饭, 然后我看电视或者出门跟一起nu朋友.

Please remember that I can't really read Mandarin yet! If there's something wrong, please, use English or Italian :).

don't have "I" will be more real.

之后is right

跟朋友一起出门 is right order

跟女朋友看电视或者出门，right order

Chinese order is sb with sb  at sometime do sth.

for an example:我和女朋友9点钟出门去吃晚饭。(i go out to have dinner with my girlfriend at 9:00 p.m.)

finally,title may be better if "我的日常生活".”每天”is used as adv in Chinese. 

sorry for my poor English:)


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我的每天!

我每天早上9点起床, 先洗澡, 然后运动一个小时. 10点半到11点喝绿茶, 然后直到14点我学习汉语直到14点. 14点到15点吃午饭, 之后有时侯我出门跟一起 朋友一起出门, 有时侯我学习汉语直到19点. 20点到21点吃晚饭, 然后我看电视或者跟朋友一起出门。

Please remember that I can't really read Mandarin yet! If there's something wrong, please, use English or Italian :).
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我的每一天!

我每天早上9点起床, 先洗澡, 然后运动一个小时. 10点半到11点喝绿茶, 然后直到14点我学习汉语直到14点. 14点到15点吃午饭,之 以后有时侯候（侯and候are different words）我跟朋友一起出门跟一起 朋友, 有时侯候我学习汉语直到19点. 我20点到21点吃晚饭, 然后我看电视或者跟朋友一起出门跟一起nu朋友.

Please remember that I can't really read Mandarin yet! If there's something wrong, please, use English or Italian :).
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我的每天一天


我每天早上9点起床, 先洗澡, 然后运动一个小时. 10点半到11点喝绿茶, 然后直到14点我学习汉语. 14点到15点吃午饭, 以之后有时侯我出门跟一起 朋友在一起, 有时侯我学习汉语直到19点. 20点到21点吃晚饭, 然后我看电视或者跟女朋友一起出门跟一起nu朋友.


Please remember that I can't really read Mandarin yet! If there's something wrong, please, use English or Italian :).
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我的每天!

我每天早上9点起床, 先洗澡, 然后运动一个小时. 10点半到11点喝绿茶, 然后直到14点我学习汉语. 14点到15点吃午饭, 以后有时侯我出门會跟一起 朋友一起, 有时侯我学习汉语直到19点. 20点到21点吃晚饭, 然后我會看电视或者出门跟一起群朋友.

Please remember that I can't really read Mandarin yet! If there's something wrong, please, use English or Italian :).

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