Wo3 de tian1
jin1 tian1 wo3 qi3 wo3 de zi4xing2che1. ke3shi4 you xia4 yu4. Wo3 shile1. Ming1 tian1 wo zhi4 bing4. zhen1, bu4 zhen1? Wo bu zhi1dao.
bu4guo4, ming1 tian1 wo qu4 Hamilton, kan4 dao wo3 de peng2you3. Wo3 jiang1 wo3 de zì4 xíng2 che1? ye3xu3 ta1 hui4 zai4ci1 xia4 yu3. ai1ya1! Wo3 gai1 zen3 me ban4?
In English: Today, I went on my bike, but it was raining. I got wet. Tomorrow I will be sick, maybe, mabe not. I don't know.
However, tomorrow I am going to Hamilton to see my friends. Should I take my bike? Maybe it will rain again? What should I do?
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Wo3 de tian1
jin1 tian1 wo3 qi3 wo3 de zi4xing2che1. ke3shi4 you xia4 yu4. Wo3 shile1. Ming1 tian1 wo zhi4 bing4. zhen1, bu4 zhen1? Wo bu zhi1dao.bu4guo4, ming1 tian1 wo qu4 Hamilton, kan4 dao wo3 de peng2you3. Wo3 jiang1 wo3 de zì4 xíng2 che1? ye3xu3 ta1 hui4 zai4ci1 xia4 yu3. ai1ya1! Wo3 gai1 zen3 me ban4?
今天我骑我的自行车。可是有have（又again？）下雨。我湿了。明天我治病正不正（？I can't understand what you wwant to say. maybe you want to express "整不整"，which in Chinese dialect means do sth or not do sth）?我不知道不（bu2）过，明天我去 Hanilton，看到我的朋友。（better: 看望我的朋友。）我将（？maybe you want to say "我将要骑我的自行车"）我的自行车？也许它会再次下雨。啊呀！我该怎么办？
some suggestion for you: you can write it in two language to make people comprehend you. It is improtant to study how to use Chinese characters.
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Honestly,if u learnning chinese only in this way and ignore the charaters,that would be preposterous as far as we chinese would think,and how could u read and write...
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Wo3 de tian1
jin1 tian1 wo3 qi3 (qi2)wo3 de zi4xing2che1. ke3shi4 you(you4) xia4 yu4. Wo3 shile1. Ming1(Ming 2) tian1 wo zhi4 bing4. zhen1, bu4 zhen1? Wo bu zhi1dao(dao 4).bu4guo4, ming1(ming 2) tian1 wo qu4 Hamilton, kan4 dao wo3 de peng2you3. Wo3 jiang1 wo3 de zì4 xíng2 che1? ye3xu3 ta1 hui4 zai4ci1 xia4 yu3. ai1ya1! Wo3 gai1 zen3 me ban4?
In English: Today, I went on my bike, but it was raining. I got wet. Tomorrow I will be sick, maybe, mabe not. I don't know.
However, tomorrow I am going to Hamilton to see my friends. Should I take my bike? Maybe it will rain again? What should I do?
Well done! Keep on working^-^
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I can teach you Chinese characters if you want. Do you have wechat?skype is also available.But I only use it when I have finished my homework.
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interesting
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