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Report about an Environmental Conference Introduction. The aim of this report is to assess the usefulness ogf the environmental conference for next year students. Analise of the Conference: Some aspects of the conference were good, as the availability to choose among the range of seminars and the information stand, which provided a large variety of truly useful handouts. Although the dealt topics were interesting, perflectly explained and related to our course, it was complicated to attend correctly the seminars due the overbooking suffered. Lecture time was also a good point to exchange ideas, however I missed interpreters who lead the talk. At the end of the conference, I found extremely short the time offered to set out doubts therefore the conference seemed to end up unresolved. Suggestions: There are various improvements that could be made which would make the conference more effective. Firstly, the capacity of the seminars should be controlled to avoid overbooking. Also setting a limit of seminars chosen per student would disperse the crowds. Secondly, interpreters should be invited to the lectures. Thirdly, the time for exchanging impressions with the representatives of the attender organisations should be extened to make the conference topics more clear to people. Conclusion. Overall, it is probably wothwhile sending students in the future to this conference, especially if improvements can be implemented.

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Report about an Environmental Conference

Introduction.
The aim of this report is to assess the usefulness of the environmental conference for next year's students.

Analysis of the Conference:
Some aspects of the conference were good, such as, the availability to choose among the range of seminars and the information stand, which provided a large variety of truly useful handouts. Although the dealt topics were interesting, perfectly explained and related to our course, it was complicated to attend the seminars promptly due to overbooking.
Lecture time was a good point to exchange ideas, however, I missed the interpreters who lead the talk. At the end of the conference, I found  the time offered to ask questions extremely short, therefore, the conference seemed to end up unresolved.

Suggestions:
There are various improvements that could be made which would make the conference more effective.
Firstly, the capacity of the seminars should be controlled to avoid overbooking. Also setting a limit for the number of seminars chosen per student would disperse the crowds.
Secondly, interpreters should be invited to the lectures.
Thirdly, the time for exchanging opinions and questions with the representatives of the attending organizations should be extended to make the conference topics more clear to people.

Conclusion.
Overall, it is probably worthwhile to send students to this conference in the future, especially if improvements can be implemented.


This is a great review of the conference. There were just a few mistakes here and there. Sometimes you flipped the order of prepositional phrases and adjectives in the sentences, but your meaning was always clearly understood. There were a couple spots where I replaced the words you used with words that have definitions I felt were more appropriate for your intended meaning.There were also a couple places you confused gerunds and infinitives. If you have any questions about any of the changes I've made, feel free to message me! I hope that your language learning journey is going well!

Best wishes,

Josh

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