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Mountain I am living at South Korea Republic. There is a biggest mountain, Hanra Mt. And 2nd biggest mountain, Jiri Mt. There are 1947m, 1915m. Actually this is not really big mountain than other country's mountain. But I went them all with my father. I proud about it my self. It was hard to elementry 5th grade and 6th grade . For these oppertunity, I can be closer with my father. I will go to the Nepal to hike lots of mountain.

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Mountain

I am living at South Korea Republic. There is a biggest mountain, Hanra Mt. And 2nd biggest mountain, Jiri Mt. There are 1947m, 1915m. Actually this is not really bigger mountain than other country's mountain. But I go there  with my father. I am proud about it . It was hard to elementry 5th grade and 6th grade . For this oppertunity, I can be close to my father. I will go to the Nepal to hike lots of mountains.
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Mountain

I am living at in the South Korean Republic. There is a  The biggest mountain is Mt Hanra Mt. and the 2nd biggest mountain is Mt Jiri Mt. They are 1947m, 1915m high. Actually, this is they are not really as big as mountains in than other countries, mountain. but I went  climbed them both all with my father. I'm proud of about it myself. It was hard for an to elementry 5th grade and 6th grade school child. For these This opportunity, I can be brought me closer with to my father. I will want to go to the Nepal to hike across lots of mountain.

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Mountain

I live in the South Korean Republic. There is the biggest mountain, Hanra Mt. And the 2nd biggest mountain is Jiri Mt. They are 1947m, 1915m respectively. Actually they are not really a bigger than others in my country. But I went to all of them with my father. I proud about it myself. It was hard from elementary to the 5th grade and 6th grade . For this opportunity, I could be closer with my father. I will go to the Nepal to hike in lots of mountains.

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