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First day of my school When I was at 5 years old, My dad joined me in first standard at Government primarily school. First day of my school was both excited and scared to me. I wore white color shirt and blue color trouser which are my school's uniform. All students stared at me and they muttered each other's ears and grinned at me that those things made me feel a little nervous. My dad gave me a chocolate box to distribute to my new classmates. Since I started giving a chocolate to each one, I felt my hands and legs were being trembled. Some girls laughed at me but I didn't angry at them because they looked as much as cute. I felt it was a decade when I finished distributing chocolates to them. In the meantime, my dad was having chat with my class teacher about me. I was weeping at class because my dad had to left me there and go to his work. My class teacher told my dad that she would take care of me. I kept weeping even after my dad left school. My teacher came to me and took her kerchief and rubbed my tears. She said 'Don't cry. you will be fine kid, will make many friends here, can play with them'. After that I felt somewhat better. Then she was telling us a story which was a moral and thinkable. We followed her story and forgot other things what were happing around us because her was so sweet and attractive. Then she sung a poem for us that we sung it back the same with her. Time went on fast than I thought. A bell rang and we saw it was 1 o'clock. It was time to have lunch. School provided it to all students and so I joined at queue for getting lunch. It was a big queue as I expected. A few boys tried to enter the middle of queue so the rest of boys yelled at them. They got suddenly angry but they went to end of queue. Finally, I reached food stall and got rice and vegetables curry and a egg on my plate. I had them and they were not bad. After lunchtime, we students had a nap for an hour. After that, while I played a few games with other students, I had a chance to chat with them. They were nice that I made some friends. I felt very delightful of having new friends. Final bell rang which means classes were over and students had to go their home. I said bye to my teacher and friends. I excitedly ran over to main entrance once its gate opened. That time only I thought of going home back because I had never ever been a place without my parents. My first day of school started somewhat terrible and ended wonderfully than I expected.

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First day of my school

When I was at 5 years old, My my dad joined me in first standard at Government primarily school. First day of my My first day in school was both excited and scared to me. I wore a white color shirt and blue color trouser which are  were my school's uniform. All students stared at me and they were muttered each other's ears and grinned at me that those things made me feel a little nervous. My dad gave me a chocolate box to distribute to my new classmates. Since I started giving a chocolate to each one, I felt my hands and legs were being trembled. Some girls laughed at me but I didn't get angry at them because they looked as much as cute. I felt it was a decade when I finished distributing chocolates to them. In the meantime, my dad was having chat with my class teacher about me. I was weeping at class because my dad had to left me there and go to his work. My class teacher told my dad that she would take care of me. I kept weeping even after my dad left school. My teacher came to me and took her kerchief and rubbed wiped my tears. She said 'Don't cry. you You will be fine kid  Sarath.   You will make many friends here whom you can play with them'. After that I felt somewhat   Somehow better. Then she told us a story about was telling us a story which was a moral and thinkable. We followed her story and forgot other things what were happing  just happened  around us because her it was so sweet and attractive. Then she sung a poem for us that we sung it back the same with her. Time went on fast than I thought. A bell rang and we saw it was 1 o'clock. It was time to have lunch. School provided it to all students and so I joined at queue for getting lunch. It was a big queue as I expected. A few boys tried to enter the middle of queue so the rest of boys yelled at them. They got suddenly angry but they went to end of queue. Finally, I reached food stall and got rice and vegetables curry and a an egg on my plate. I had them and they were not bad. After lunch lunchtime, we students had a nap for an hour. After that, while I played a few games with other students, I had a chance to chat with them. They were nice that I made some friends. I felt very delightful of to having new friends. Final bell rang which means classes were over and students had to go to their home. I said bye to my teacher and friends. I excitedly ran over to main entrance once its gate opened. That time only I thought of going home back because I had never ever been a place without my parents. My first day of school started somewhat terrible and ended wonderfully than I expected.  






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