Informal letter or email.
Dear Paco.
How are you and your family? I hope that you are fine.
My girldfriend and I have bought a new flat close to the city. It's nowadays a dificult decision but we have excitement with that.
When do you come here? Now, we have a guest room, so, come here when you want.
I'm sorry for the death of your dog.
We have a new pet, she called Goma is a small dog very awesome. She does everything that I say.
Pedro told me that you won the lottery and that you bought a new car. You are a lucky person.
Well, I have a week of holydays in August, if you want, we can make a trip to northern Europe. How about?
A hug.
Regards,
Telmo Marzabal.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 3
1
Informal letter or email.
Dear Paco,
How are you and your family? I hope you're well.
My girlfriend and I have bought a new flat close to the city. It's a difficult decision nowadays, but we are still excited about it.
When are you going to visit us? We have a guest room now, so come here whenever you want.
I'm sorry to hear about the death of your dog.
We have a new pet. Her name is Goma. She's a very awesome, very small dog. She does everything that I say.
Pedro told me that you won the lottery and that you bought a new car. You are very lucky.
Well, I have a week of holidays in August, so if you want, we can take a trip to northern Europe. How about it?
Hugs and regards,
Telmo Marzabal.
===
Hi Telmo. I made a few corrections. Yellow is a correction for grammar, punctuation or spelling. Blue is for phrasing corrections. Magenta is for vocabulary corrections.
Have a great day!
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
