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New Family well, My name is Adrian Arturo and I come up to here for sharing about my new family I met two weekends ago, therefore I want to say I am only child for mother's side, but now I've met three half-brothers and my real father after 31 years, I have to recognize I felt awkward the first times with them so it wasn´t until the second meeting I felt comfortable, we sharing our numbers phone and there more , I have two little pretty nieces. I love English and its culture and people, so if you want to share with me whatever you want, I will be there for you guys sincerely​ Adrian Arturo

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New Family

well, My name is Adrian Arturo and I come up to here for sharing about my new family I CAME UP HERE TO SHARE NEWS ABOUT MY NEW FAMILY THAT I met two weekends ago,.  therefore FIRST OFF I want to say THAT I am AN only child for  ON MY mother's side, but now I've met three half-brothers and my real father after 31 years. I have to recognize I felt awkward the first times TIME  with them so it wasn´t until the second meeting THAT I felt comfortable, we sharing SHARED  our numbers phone PHONE NUMBERS and there more  WHAT'S MORE, I  NOW ALSO have two little pretty  PRETTY LITTLE nieces.

I love English and its culture and people, so if you want to share with me whatever you want, I will be there for you guys

Sincerely​

Adrian Arturo


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New Family

well, My name is Adrian Arturo and I come up to here for sharing would like to share about my new family which I met two weekends weeks ago. therefore I want to say I am the only child for on my mother's side, but now I've met three half-brothers and my real father after 31 years. I have to recognize say that I felt awkward the first times with meeting them so - it wasn't until the second meeting I felt comfortable, and we sharing shared our phone numbers phone and there What's more, I now have two little pretty little nieces.

I love English and its culture and people, so if you want to share with me whatever you want, I will be there for you guys

Sincerely​

Adrian Arturo

Well done! Make sure to end sentences with a period, and to not have a "run-on sentence." The phrase "little pretty nieces" will sound awkward to an English speaker: "pretty little nieces" is normal - possibly because of nothing more than cultural norms.

Good luck to you and your new family!

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