Diary of my life in Canada May 22
Today, I stayed my house all day.
I just went to a supermarket, and jogged.
I had lunch with my owner.
Actually, my house lent contact doesn't include the dishes fee but she gave me lunch!
She is really kind!!! And lunch was so good! She is also good cook.
I cooked dinner but it was not good...I'm sure I shouldn't have put in liquid of canned food.
It was my big fault.
I decided I'll get lose my weight for 2kg by next month.
When I checked my weight on a bath scale, I was so depressed.
I'm getting weight on 4kg!!! It's terrible.
I wish I could be return 2 years ago. Then I had a healthy body, but now I don't.
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Great job! In English we don't talk about weight with the word 'weight'. If you just say "I lost 4kg" or "I gained 4kg" everybody understands it's about your weight. I changed many of your sentences to become more natural. Please ask me if you have any special questions about the changes.
Diary of my life in Canada May 22
Today, I mostly stayed at home my house all day.I just went to the a supermarket, and for a jog jogged.
I also had lunch with my landlady owner today.
Actually, my rental contract house lent contact doesn't include any meals, the dishes fee but she made gave me lunch anyway!
She is really kind!!! And lunch was so good! She is such a also good cook.
I cooked dinner but it was not good...I'm sure I shouldn't have put in the liquid from the of canned food I used.
It was a my big mistake fault.
I've decided I want to lose I'll get lose my weight for 2kg by next month.
When I last checked my weight on a bath scale, I was so depressed.
I'd put I'm getting weight on 4kg!!! It was It's terrible.
I wish I could be return to how I was 2 years ago. Then I had a healthy body, but now I don't.
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Not too bad! However,
Diary of my life in Canada May 22
Today, I stayed in my house all day.I just went to a supermarket, and jogged.
I had lunch with my owner landlord. You aren't a slave, you have no owner.
Actually, my housing lent lease contact doesn't include the dishes fee but she gave me lunch!
She is really kind!!! And lunch was so good! She is also good cook.
I cooked dinner but it was not good...I'm sure I shouldn't have put in liquid of canned food. do you mean that you shouldn't have put the canned food in liquid? Or that you shouldn't have put the liquid from the canned food in your recipe?
It was my big fault mistake.
I decided I'll get lose my weight for to lose 2kg by next month.
When I checked my weight on a bath scale, I was so depressed.
I'm getting weight on gained 4kg!!! It's terrible.
I wish I could be return go back 2 years ago. Back then I had a healthy body, but now I don't.
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