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Practice a foreign language Hi. I'm from Brazil and I've been learning english since 2013. I study at CCAA Scholl in Caruaru-PE. When we're learning another language we found some difficulties like to know the correct pronounce of the words, how to use verb tenses, understand expressions, and others. I'm very insecurity about the things that I've learned, so I make a decision: I will write more notes here talking about my life, things that I think and things that I like. Today I will talk a bit about me. I'm 24 years old and live in small town in Brazil's Northeast coast. I'm student at DeVry Brazil University, nowadays I'm coursing MBA Organizational Psychology and I will be finishing next year. I pretend to visit to Canada and USA, I love these countries and I will realize this desire one day. I used to play soccer when I was a kid, but now I don't practice anymore, but I love soccer, volleyball and swimming. So, that's all for today. Thanks for reading. See ya!

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Practice a foreign language

Hi. I'm from Brazil and I've been learning english since 2013. I study at CCAA Scholl in Caruaru-PE.
When we're learning another language we found encountered some difficulties like to know the correct pronounciation of the words, how to use verb tenses, understand expressions, and others and how to understand expressions among other things. I'm very insecurity insecure about the things that I've learned, so I made a decision: I will write more notes here talking about my life, things that I think about and things that I like.
Today I will talk a bit about me. I'm 24 years old and live in small town in Brazil's Northeast coast. I'm a student at DeVry Brazil University, nowadays I'm coursing  majoring in MBA Organizational Psychology and I will be finishing next year. I pretend plan to visit to Canada and USA, I love these countries and I will realize this desire one day.
I used to play soccer when I was a kid, but now I don't practice anymore, but I love soccer, volleyball and swimming.
So, that's all for today. Thanks for reading. See ya!


The two things that stuck out most were "insecruity" and "pretend." You wouldn't say "eu sou muito inseguranca" but that's what you said in English. Now you know :). 


As for "pretend" it only means "fingir" in English. So you say "plan" or "intend" instead.

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Practice a foreign language

Hi. I'm from Brazil and I've been learning english English since 2013. I study at CCAA Scholl in Caruaru-PE.
When we're learning another language, we found some difficulties like to know  knowing the correct pronounce pronunciation of the words, how to use verb tenses, understanding expressions, and others. I'm very  insecurity insecure about the things that I've learned, so I make  have made a decision: I will write more notes here talking about my life, things that I think and things that I like.
Today I will talk a bit about me. I'm 24 years old and live in small town in Brazil's Northeast coast. I'm a student at DeVry Brazil University, nowadays I'm coursing  taking courses in MBA Organizational Psychology and I will be finishing next year. I pretend  intend to visit to Canada and USA, I love these countries and I will realize this desire one day.
I used to play soccer when I was a kid, but now I don't practice anymore, but I love soccer, volleyball and swimming.
So, that's all for today. Thanks for reading. See ya!

REMINDER: In Portuguese, you say Sou estudante, Sou professor, etc. but in English we say I am A student, I am A doctor, etc.

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