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Environmental Problems Dear Mayor, I´m writting this letter to make suggestions regarding factory that will be building near Tablas de Daimiel nature reserve in 3 years. I´m worried about this, I think isn´t the best location for the factory. I would like you to think about some of disadvantages will have if the factory will built near nature reserve. First of all, It´s important you think about environmental balance, some of plants and animals will be drinking water with a bad qualities for cause of factory. Furthermore, in a few years, into the reserve will have less nature because animals and plants will have several healthy problems. Finally, I would like to you to propose an alternative location for the factory. Not far away at west, there are an old farm. Nobody lives around the old farm. I wish you would think about this advice . Thank you very much for giving me the chance for opinion about the nature reserve. Sincerely, a resident.

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Environmental Problems

Dear Mayor,
I'm writting this letter to make suggestions regarding the factory that will be built near the Tablas de Daimiel nature reserve in 3 years.
I'm worried about this, because I think isn't the best location for the factory.
I would like you to think about some of disadvantages will have if of building the factory will built near the nature reserve.

First of all, It's important you think about environmental balance (better: impact), some of the plants and animals will be drinking poor-quality water with a bad qualities for because of the factory.

Furthermore, in a few years, into the reserve will have less nature because animals and plants will have several healthy problems.

Finally, I would like to you to propose an alternative location for the factory. Not far away at to the west, there are is an old farm. Nobody lives around the old farm.

I wish you would think about this advice (better: recommendation, or proposal).
Thank you very much for giving me the chance for your consideration of my opinion about the nature reserve.
Sincerely, a resident.

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ok! Thank you very much. Have not mistakes?
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In England a letter to the Mayor would be addressed: To the Lord Mayor, The Right Honorary.... Lord Mayor. The Right Honourable.

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