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A sad but hopeful letter
Dear Peter,
I have read a sad article in our local newspaper about the local furniture factory. I became annoyed when I have discovered that our furniture factory stopped its activity and had to close a month ago.
I have known you since we were very young and, as you know, we were really close friends in our childhood. Additionally, our families are have been very close since those days.
I am writing you because I am a bit concerned about you and your family and I would like to help you.
For this reason, I can bring your CV to my boss and perhaps we will work together in the future.
In addition, I can take care of your children when (better: while) you go for a job interview or anywhere else.
I know that you are a clever man and that you will find a new interesting and well-paying job very soon.
I think that you want to find a job as soon as possible, but don't be worried if that doesn't happen soon.
However, I would like to give you some advice.
-Firstly, don't attend to job interviews wearing earrings.
-Secondly, don't be sad or worried, because your close relatives shall will suffer if they see you in that state.
-Finally, don't hesitate to call your friends. We will be very pleased to help you.
For this reason (better: So), I encourage you to phone me.
Yours Sincerely,
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