在我的房間
在我的房間有多的東西。在書架，我有多的書。 有語言的課本，小說，除了飛駝本集。我床很大。 有兩個窗和一個壁櫥。在這裡我在學習中文。我房間很整齊因為打掃每週末。
In my room, there's a lot of things. In my bookshelf, there are a lot of books. There are language textbooks, novels, in addition to the Vedas. My bed is very big. There are two windows and one closet. My room is very tidy because I clean it every weekend.
(Any corrections are appreciated! 謝謝!）
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在我的房間
在我的房間有很多的東西。在書架上，我有很多的書。 有語言的課本、小說，除了还有飛駝本集。我的床很大。 有兩個窗户和一個壁櫥。在這裡我在學習中文。我房間很整齊因為打掃每週末打扫。In my room, there's a lot of things. In my bookshelf, there are a lot of books. There are language textbooks, novels, in addition to the Vedas. My bed is very big. There are two windows and one closet. My room is very tidy because I clean it every weekend.
(Any corrections are appreciated! 謝謝!）
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在我的房間 我的房間
在我的房間有多的東西。我的房間有很多的東西。
在書架，我有多的書。我的書架上有很多書。
有語言的課本，小說，除了飛駝本集。除了吠陀經，還有語言課本，小說。
我床很大。 有兩個窗和一個壁櫥。我的床很大。有兩扇窗和壹個壁櫥。
在這裡我在學習中文。我在這裏學習中文。
我房間很整齊因為打掃每週末。我的房間很整潔，因為我每周末都打掃它。
In my room, there's a lot of things. In my bookshelf, there are a lot of books. There are language textbooks, novels, in addition to the Vedas. My bed is very big. There are two windows and one closet. My room is very tidy because I clean it every weekend.
(Any corrections are appreciated! 謝謝!）
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我的房間有許多的東西。
我的書架有許多的書，除了飛駝本集外，有語言的課本以及小說。
我的床非常大，有兩個窗和一個壁櫥。
我的房間很整齊因為我每個週末都會打掃。
In my room, there's a lot of things. In my bookshelf, there are a lot of books. There are language textbooks, novels, in addition to the Vedas. My bed is very big. There are two windows and one closet. My room is very tidy because I clean it every weekend.
(Any corrections are appreciated! 謝謝!）
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在我的房間
在我的房間有很多的東西。在書架，我有多的書。 书架上有很多书，有語言的課本，除了飛駝本集，还有语文课本、小說。我的床很大。 有兩個窗和一個壁櫥。在這裡我在學習中文。我房間很整齊因為打掃每週末。因为我每个周末都会打扫，所以我的房间很整洁。In my room, there's a lot of things. In my bookshelf, there are a lot of books. There are language textbooks, novels, in addition to the Vedas. My bed is very big. There are two windows and one closet. My room is very tidy because I clean it every weekend.
(Any corrections are appreciated! 謝謝!）
In chinese,we use habitually ‘’bacause" and "so" in a sentence that expresses reasons and results at the same time .
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HI!You have good command of Chinese,but you do need to be careful with some pronoun problems,it is not a big deal ,but if you pay some attention,I believe you can improve your Chinese !!
"我床很大。 有兩個窗和一個壁櫥。在這裡我在學習中文。"
有兩個窗和一個壁櫥。(where?bed?room?)
also,what do "在這裡"refer to ?
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