My favourite TV programme
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you.
My favourite kind of programmes are sports programmes because I love the sport, specially the programs which talk to football because I am a Real Madrid team’s fan. I like to know the things that happen in the sport. In Spain is very famous a television programme called “Los Manolos” and my favourite part is when they show the highlights of the match.
I usually watch this kind of programme twice a week because it is very funny.
I hope to see you soon,
Regards,
JuanFran.
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My favourite TV programme
Dear Tom,Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you.
My favourite kind of programs are sports programs because I love the sport, specially the programs which talk about football because I am a Real Madrid team’s fan. I like to know the things that happen in the sport. In Spain there is very famous a television program called “Los Manolos” and my favourite part is when they show the highlights of the match.
I usually watch this kind of program twice a week because it is very funny.
I hope to see you soon,
Regards,
JuanFran.
Programme = program
'The sport" = Means 'only' one sport. But you like sport in general, specially football.
Real Madrid team's fan = Because 'Real Madrid' is a proper noun (name), you don't need 'team's' because it is a team, it does not need to be specified. Plus, if people don't know who Real Madrid are, they are living under a rock!! :)
Hope this helps, great writing
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My favourite TV programme
Dear Tom,Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you.
My favourite kind of programmes are sports programmes/programs because I love the sport, specially the programmes/programs in which I like to talk to about football because I am a Real Madrid team’s team fan. I like to know the things that happen in the sport. In Spain, football is a very famous a television programme called “Los Manolos” and my favourite part is when they show the highlights of the match.
I usually watch this kind of programme twice a week because it is very funny.
I hope to see you soon,
Regards,
JuanFran.
(Very good here, I had to add some things and correct a couple of mistake. Overall, pretty good! ^-^ Note: Programmes means Programs in British English and is the equivalent in American English to Programs. Neither is wrong, it is all on what type of English your country teaches. )
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