Can you help me with the pitch of the TV show I wrote a pitch of a TV show as a homework of my english class. Here, i want to find a native speaker help me to correct the article, thank you. The article is pretty long, thank you for your patience and warm help! Pitch: The protagonist is an orphan who lived in the orphanage since 8 years old. His father, a policeman, died in a military operation against illegal immigration and his mother left him. He grew up in the orphanage, determined to follow in his father's footsteps and become a policeman. He made his dream true after coming into the adults’ world. However, he was assigned to work in a block where most of residents are immigrants for his rude and obtrusive behavior against his superior. Working in the block, he is busy dealing with various ethnic groups of immigrants every day. At the beginning, he is antagonistic to or even hostile to these immigrants. Differences between language and culture bring tons of troubles and funny stories to his life. Gradually, as he gets to know the culture and life of immigrants better, and learns about the dreams as well as hardship that immigrants have. He understands and accepts the culture differences between different ethnic groups, realizing the beauty of human nature is beyond race. He makes friends with immigrants from all kinds of backgrounds and even fall in love with a Chinese girl. He finally understands the profound essence of America as a nation of immigrants, also he understands the true meaning of the American dream.