10 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance
What's your weather? Over here it's a bit rainy and cloudy.
I hope you and your family are doing great.
Sorry for having not written to you in a while. My little son is keeping me quite busy.
He is so demanding. He always wants to be held in my arms. As soon as I put him in his cot he demands that I pick him back into my arms.
I am sleep-deprived most nights. He wakes me, about five six times a night, and after that it is difficult for me to get back to sleep.
I try to have a nap during the day while my son is asleep but usually in vain.
Even though I need a nap in the daytime I find that I can't fall asleep. It is like someone is propping my eyes open with matchsticks.
Even as I am typing this letter my son sound asleep on the top of me.
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10 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance
What's your weather like? Over here it's a bit rainy and cloudy.
I hope you and your family are doing great.
Sorry for having not written to you in a while. My little son is keeping me quite busy.
He is so demanding. He always wants to be held in my arms. As soon as I put him in his cot he demands that I pick him back into my arms. I have corrected this sentence twice before!
I am sleep-deprived most nights. He wakes me, about five or six times a night, and after that it is difficult for me to get back to sleep.
I try to have a nap during the day while my son is asleep but usually in vain.
Even though I need a nap in the daytime I find that I can't fall asleep. It is like someone is propping my eyes open with matchsticks.
Even as I am typing this letter my son is sound asleep on the top of me.
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What's the weather like where you are? Over here it's a bit rainy and cloudy.
Sorry I have not written to you in a while. My little son is keeping me quite busy.
He is so demanding and he always wants to be held in my arms. As soon as I put him in his cot he demands that I pick him up back into my arms.
I am sleep-deprived most nights. He wakes me, about five or six times a night, and after that it is difficult for me to get back to sleep.
I try to have a nap, during the day while my son is asleep, but usually in vain.
Even though I need a nap in the daytime I find that I can't fall asleep. It is like someone is propping my eyes open with matchsticks.
Even as I am typing this letter my son is sound asleep on top of me.
Just a few corrections/suggestions - this is a great piece of writing!
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