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My first cover letter Dear Sir/Madam I wish to apply for the position of general assistant that was advertised last week on the gumtree.com website. I finished my studies few mounth ago, this year I look for a job abroad, because I want to travel and improve my English. I am a person with great potencial of adaptiblity, hard-working, responsible, and of quick learning. In my CV you can see that I have experience as waiter, and I don’t have anyone problem for work in other functions. I am look for a job LIVE-IN because I want live in a new place, but not in a big city. I think that is a beautiful place and a good place for look for a job. You wouldn’t repent of working with me, if you contract me I very much hope that you will look favourably upon my application by recognizing my enthusiasm as well as talents in the field of hospitality, and invite me for an interview. I look forward to hearing from you.

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My first cover letter

Dear Sir/Madam

I wish to apply for the position of general assistant that was advertised last week on the gumtree.com website.
This year I am looking for a job abroad, because I want to travel and improve my English. I finished my studies a few months ago. I am a person with great potential to adapt. I am hard-working, responsible, and a fast learner. In my CV you can see that I have experience as a waiter, and I am happy to work in other functions, too.

I am look for a job LIVE-IN because I want to live in a new place, but not in a big city. I think that is a beautiful place and a good place for look for a job.

If youhire me, you won't regret it.


I very much hope that you will look favourably upon my application by recognizing my enthusiasm as well as talents in the field of hospitality, and invite me for an interview.

I look forward to hearing from you.

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My first cover letter

Dear Sir/Madam

I wish to apply for the position of general assistant that was advertised last week on the gumtree.com website.
I finished my studies a few months ago and this year I look for a job abroad because I want to travel and improve my English. I am a person with great potential, adaptable, hard-working, responsible and quick to learn. In my CV you can see that I have experience as a waiter and I don’t have any problems to work in other areas.

I am looking for a LIVE-IN job because I want live in a new place but not in a big city. I think that is a beautiful place and a good place for look for a job.
I feel certain that you will not regret giving me a job if you contract me

I very much hope that you will look favourably upon my application by recognizing my enthusiasm as well as talents in the field of hospitality, and invite me for an interview.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Very well written!

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My first cover letter

Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to apply for the position of general assistant that I have seen advertised last week on the gumtree.com website.


I finished my studies a few months ago and now, this year, I am looking for a job abroad because I would like to travel and improve my English. I am a person of great potential and adaptability, hard-working, responsible, and a quick learner. In my CV you can see that I have experience as waiter, though, I am open to work in all different types of roles.

I am look for a 'LIVE-IN' job as I would like to experience life in a new place, though I would prefer not to live in a city.


I ensure you that if you employ me, I will not let you down.

I very much hope that you will look favourably upon my application by recognising my enthusiasm and talents in the field of hospitality.

I look forward to hearing from you.


I have corrected this as best as I can, though there were a few sentences that I did not understand the meaning of. However, having said that, this is a good letter which displays a fair competence of English- you should be proud!

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