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Dear Shara:
How are you? I've received your letter and I like the idea of going to Paris next week, but my parents would like to know many things and details about the trip. ¿What time must I go to the airport?¿When will we arrive?¿What time is the flight departure time? I hope you reply me soon.
I'm looking forward visit Paris, it's my favourite city! When I was a child i went to DisneyLand Paris but this time I guess we will go to other sides although if we go to that amusement park I don't care.
My sister would like to go with us, do you remember her? Visiting France is her biggest dream because she want to study French philology and would like to live there in the future. Do you mind she come?
I wait your answer. Love
Ana
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Informal e-mail
Dear Shara:How are you? I've received your letter and I like the idea of going to Paris next week, but my parents would like to know many things and details about the trip. ¿What time should I go? ¿When will we arrive?¿What time is the departure of our flight? I hope you'll reply me soon.
I'm looking forward to visit Paris, it's my favourite city! When I was a child i went to DisneyLand Paris but this time I guess we will go to other sides although if we go to that amusement park I don't care.
My sister would like to go with us, do you remember her? Visiting France is her biggest dream because she want to study French philology and would like to live there in the future. Would you mind if she'll come with us? I will wait for your answer.
Love
Ana
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