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Summer is coming! Summer is the best time for people around the world. Everyone are happy and they enjoy their free time with friends or practising sports. Normally, in Spain, people work in a intensive schedule, I mean from 7:00 a.m to 15:00 p.m. with 30 minutes to rest and have the lunch. In my point this is very good because you can spend the time in swimming pools or having naps or helping your children... Obviously, there are a small percentaje of people that they have to work in the evening and also in the night. My situation is on this case. I am a salesman and I have to work while people are free but It is sometimes a bit frustrating because at 20:00 p.m. when I am thinking about close the shop, a few of families come in and I have tiço serve them all the time they need. Fortunately, my boss reward us later. I don not know if the rest of the world work like that but could try it. Thank you!!!

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Summer is coming!

Summer is the best time for people around the world. Everyone is happy and they enjoy their free time with friends,  or play sports. Normally, in Spain, people work long days - from 7:00 a.m to 15:00 p.m. - with a 30 minute lunch break. In my view this is very good because you can go swimming, nap or help your children.

Obviously, there is a small percentage of people who have to work in the evening and also at night, like in my case. I am a salesman and I have to work while people are free but It is sometimes a bit frustrating because at 8 p.m. when I am thinking about close the shop, a few families come in and I have to serve them. Fortunately, my boss rewards me for that.

I don't  know if the rest of the world works in the same way. (don't really know what you are trying to say).

Thank you!!!


I have just changed things to sound more natural, and have also corrected some grammar mistakes.

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Summer is coming!

Summer is the best time for people around the world. Everyone is are happy and they enjoy their free time with friends or practicing practising sports. Normally in Spain people work in a intensive schedule. They work from 7:00 to 15:00 with 30 minutes to rest and have the lunch. From my in point of view this is very good because you can spend the time in swimming pools, have naps, or help your children.

Obviously, there is are a small percentage percentaje of people that they have to work in the evening and also in the at night. My situation is on this case. This has been my situation. I am a salesman and I have to work while others are off people are free. It is sometimes a bit frustrating because at 20:00 when I am thinking about  closing close the shop, a few of families come in and I have Tiço serve them all the time they need??Fortunately my boss rewards us later.

I don not know if the rest of the world work like that but could try it.

Thank you!!!

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