boring day
Boring day.
I stayed at home all the day today, I did somethings that I think they are boring. Since the sun raises at the east I woke up very early even I knew that today is holy day that means I do not have any class in college after I woke up I went to the market to accompany my mom to buy something after that we went home soon because my mother and I knew that my old brother needs the motorcycle. When we arrived at home my mother was going to cook and I was going to tidy my bedroom after I finished my work the breakfast was ready and family with I were took a breakfast together I was very full because I ate a lot of food, and I think that was delicious food that I had in breakfast. After that I was going to wash my clothes especially my uniform because I am going to wear them today. After all of my works have done I took a rest for a while in my room. Nothing special I had.
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boring day
Boring day.I stayed at home all (the) day today, I did somethings that I think they are boring. Since the sun raises at IN the east I woke up very early even THOUGH I knew that today is A holy day that means I do not have any class in college. After I woke up I went to the market to accompany my mom to buy something. After that we went home because my mother and I knew that my older brother needs the motorcycle. When we arrived at home my mother was going to cook and I was going to tidy my bedroom. After I finished my work the breakfast was ready and MY family and with I were took a breakfast together. I was very full because I ate a lot of food, and I think that IT was delicious. food that I had in breakfast. After that I was going to wash my clothes, especially my uniform because I am going to wear them today. After all of my workshave was done I took a rest for a while in my room. I had nothing special........
older brother or elder brother also works.
I think this is good, try to think and write in sentences. "I did this". "Then I did this other thing". When you have the sentence correct you can move into longer paragraphs.
Lets look at one long sentence
"Since the sun raises at the east I woke up very early even I knew that today is holy day that means I do not have any class in college"
Does this make any sense. I think not, for instance does the sun rising in the east mean that today is a holy day???? No.
So your structure should be "I woke up early as the sun rises in the east and fills my room with light"
"I did not need to get up early as today is not a school day as it is a holy day"
The word" since" or "as", suggests that the first statement is a reason for the second statement. Probably best not to start a sentence with "since" or "as" until you get better control of your English.
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