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I am so glad have the chance to talk with you. according to the education plan for me by my planning leader, i have finished learning the bascial common information including ISO, spare parts, and work order. meanwhile i also take these jobs right now. About planner information, i will spend more time to learn.Of course with my colleague support, itake someone right now. But for whole planning system, i also need time to study.
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Hi Moony. Well done for trying to write this short speech.
1. 'Meanwhile, I also take these jobs right now' - I'm unsure what you want to say here. You probably need to use the present continuous here ('I am taking') as you are talking about something happening 'right now'. 'Take' is probably not the right verb to use, but it is difficult to suggest a better one unless I understand what you're trying to communicate.
2. 'I take someone right now' - Again, I'm not sure what you want to communicate. Perhaps you are speaking about 'hiring' someone?
3. I know this is a speech, but try to build a good habit of using capital letters (大写) at the beginning of sentences.
Good effort. Hope this helps!
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