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Thinking Sometimes, I found a very stange thing that , when I grow up to older than before, I become sensitive easily. Even because one little thing. One time, I listened a new English song , it is so beautiful that I can't control crying .I don't know why. Maybe the song made me remember some old things or some old people. How time flies! We become older than many years ago, I really want to come back to my chidhood , to feel the good old times again!

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Thinking

Sometimes, I found  find it a very stange  thing  that  when  as I grow up to older than before, I become more sensitive easily.
Even if it is because  of one little thing.

One time, I listened a new English song , it is so beautiful that I can't couldn't control my crying .I don't know why. Maybe the song made me remember some old things or some old people.

How time flies! We become older than many years ago, I really want to come back to my childhood , to feel the good old times again!

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