Feell the rain!
Today is raining all the day. No, I am not going to complain about the bad weather. But I feel sleepy and it is hard to be concentrated in such days. It is pouring and pouring without stopping. :/ The air is so fresh and full of lovely fragrances of blossoming flowers and ripe strawberries, that I would be agree to spend all the day outside! But it is getting windy, so drops of the rain are hitting on the face and hair. Some people would say that it is kind of pilling for skin and massage for the head, but it is not that warm to take the shower right at the street. So, I choose to be inside of house with nice book and cup of fruit tea.
It's a rainy day, don't sleep! Try to see positive sides in it.
Have a nice mood, enjoy the moment of life! :-)
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Feel the rain!
Today it has been raining [1] all the day. No, I am not going to complain about the bad weather. But I feel sleepy, and it is hard to concentrate on such days. It is pouring and pouring without stopping. :/ The air is so fresh and full of lovely fragrances of blossoming flowers and ripe strawberries, that I would be agreeable to spending the entire/whole the day outside! But it is getting windy, so drops of the rain [2] are hitting my face and hair. Some people would say that it is kind of peeling for the skin and massage for the head, but it isn't warm enough to take a "shower" right in the street. So, I choose to stay inside of my house with a nice book and cup of fruit tea.It's a rainy day, but don't go to sleep! Try to see the positive side of it.
Keep in good spirits, and enjoy this moment of life! :-)
[1] Используете "present perfect tense" [настоящее совершеное время], когда действие или состояние, которое началось в прошлом, и доходит до настоящего момента.
[2] Вариант: ... so raindrops are hitting my face and hair.
[3] Предлог «of» -- лишнее.
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I like rain
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