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New Job Finally, i got the new job. the job that i've been looking since im still study at collage. Human Resources Development is my passion. I love to manage people around me and help them to develop their skill. In Indonesia, my country, Human resources still be a serious problem. The lack of jobs, unemployment and there's still many people who have not got a proper education. I hope, one day, i can help this country and my people, indonesian people to get better, especially in human resources. i believe if this country want to improve they should make sure that the human resources must get better first.

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A New Job

Finally, I got a the new job. The job that I've been looking for since I was at college.

the job that i've been looking since im still study at collage.

Human Resources Development is my passion. I love to manage people around me and help them to develop their skills.
In Indonesia, my country, Human resources is still be a serious problem. The lack of jobs, unemployment and there's  are still many people who have not got a proper education.
I hope, one day, I can help this country and my people, Indonesian people to improve/develop get better, especially in human resources.
I believe if this country wants to improve, they should make sure that the human resources must get better grow/improve/develop first.

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New Job

Finally, I (You should always write this with capital letter) got a new job. (Or : the job I wanted)

This is the job that I've been looking for since I was still studying at the college. (Or:since I was still a college student)

Human Resources Development is my passion. I love to manage people around me and help them to develop their skill.
In Indonesia, my country, Human resources still be are still a serious problem. The There is lack of jobs, unemployment and there's there are still many people who have not got (or haven't got) a proper education.
I hope that one day I can help this country and my people, indonesian people to get better, especially in human resources.
I believe that if this country wants to improve, they should make sure that the human resources must first get better first.

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