The Golden Wedding
Three years ago, my parents celebrated their golden wedding. That occasion was an special day for the family.
During two month before I prepared everything for the surprise, I booked in a restautant, called to their brothers and sisters, etc.
The aniversary was on Friday, but the best was celebrate on Saturday, the next day. While my uncles and aunts were waiting in the restaurant my parents didn´t have idea, that when arreved they meet which the family
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The Golden Wedding
Three years ago, my parents celebrated their golden wedding. That occasion was a special day for the family.During the two months beforehand, I prepared everything for the surprise. I booked in a restaurant, called to their brothers and sisters, etc.
The anniversary was on Friday, but the best day to celebrate was on Saturday, the next day. While my uncles and aunts were waiting in the restaurant, my parents didn´t have any idea [or, "had no idea"], that when they arrived, they would meet with the family.
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The Golden Wedding
Three years ago, my parents celebrated their golden wedding. That occasion was an special day for the family.During Two months before, I prepared everything for the surprise. I booked in a restaurant, called to their brothers and sisters, etc.
The anniversary was on Friday, but the best was celebrated on Saturday, the next day. While my uncles and aunts were waiting in the restaurant, my parents didn´t have any idea, that when they arrived, they would meet with the family
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The Golden Anniversary
Three years ago, my parents celebrated their golden anniversary. That occasion was a special day for the family.During the two months before, I prepared everything for the surprise. I booked in a restaurant and called to their brothers and sisters, etc.
The anniversary was on Friday, but it was best to celebrate on Saturday, the next day. While my uncles and aunts were waiting in the restaurant, my parents didn´t have any idea (no comma here) that when they arrived the whole family would be there.
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I wrote "(no comma here)" because the option to put a line through it in editing is hard to see over punctuation.
Your parents are blessed to have you.
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