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Can someone help me with this letter? Hello! My name is Cristian , I am 18 years old and I am from Colombia. This is what I want to share with you darling. It's impossible to forget the first time I had the chance to talk to you, because you know what? My life completely changed and now,I am a different person.I still can't believe that someone who lives in another country can make me feel so happy as If were here with me. For you, I would go everywhere and more, just to see your beautiful smile that I absolutely adore. You can be sure that I will always be with you because I was taught that when you love someone, you have to show your feelings in the clearest ways and be trustworthy. I am so excited you are coming here soon that those two weeks I will remember them for ever. From where you are, you have the power to touch my heart, you’ve reached a place deep inside, no one else could ever find. I also remember the first words I told you when I met you on Verbling and then you laughed: Soy de Colombia, el mejor país del mundo. Or how about this: When you smile, the stars come out in the heaven. Perhaps you don't remember all our conversations but I do, because I always appreciate the perfect moments I live. Every time I go to bed, the thought that we will see each other soon comes into my mind, and that is the day in which I will be happy. You are really important in my life and I have always felt admiration for you because you have accomplished everything you set out to do. At night, when I can't sleep, I want nothing more than stay and talk to you. Happy birthday to you , you’re far from here and it makes me a little sad but when we meet face to face by the first time I’ll be very happy. I hope you enjoy your lucky day. Although I’m not with you right now, I really think about you every day. I hope to see you pretty soon. All my friends and family send you a big regard saying they are so excited to see you soon and meet the best person I have ever met. You are about to come to the country where I come from, you are about to know my roots and why I always say my country is the best. Anyway, I am waiting for you because this trip will be unforgettable for both of us. Have a terrific day!!

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Can someone help me with this letter?

Hello!
My name is Cristian , I am 18 years old and I am from Colombia. This is what I want to share with you darling. It's impossible to forget the first time (that) I had the chance to talk to you, because you know what? My life completely changed and now, I am a different person. I still can't believe that someone who lives in another country can make me feel so happy, as If you were here with me. For you, I would go everyanywhere and more, just to see your beautiful smile that I absolutely adore. You can be sure that I will always be with you because I was taught that when you love someone, you have to show your feelings in the clearest ways and (to) be trustworthy. I am so excited about you are coming here soon that those two weeks (I am sure) I will remember themthose two weeks for ever.
From where you are, you have the power to touch my heart, you’ve reached a place deep inside, that no one else could ever find. I also remember the first words that I told you when I met you on Verbling, and thenmaking you laughed: Soy de Colombia, el mejor país del mundo. Or how about this: when you smile, the stars come out in the heavens. Perhaps you don't remember all our conversations but I do, because I always appreciate the perfect moments I live.
Every time I go to bed, the thought that we will see each other soon comes into my mind, and that is the day in which I will be happy. You are really important in my life and I have always felt admiration for you because you have accomplished everything you set out to do. At night, when I can't sleep, I want nothing more than to stay and talk to you.
Happy birthday to you, you’re far from here and it makes me a little sad but when we meet face to face byfor the first time I’ll be very happy. I hope you enjoy your luckyspecial day. Although I’m not with you right now, I really think about you every day. I hope to see you pretty soon. All my friends and family send you a big regard saying they are so excited to see you soon and meet the best person I have ever met. You are about to come to the country where I come from, you are about to know my roots and why I always say my country is the best. Anyway, I am waiting for you because this trip will be unforgettable for both of us. Have a terrific day!!

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