10 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance
Good day to you.
How are you? What's your weather like? Over here, it's quite warm although when it gets darker it becomes a bit cold.
I have tried to write to you several times, but as soon as I switch on my laptop my son demands that I pick him up. He likes to be held. He is in my arms all day long and adores to sleep with his tummy on my tummy and snuggles to my chest. He is so demanding but at the same time he is very calm when he in my arms. He tends to get agitated as I change his nappy or bathe him. He seldom gets tearful or antsy. Sadly, he is still suffering from colic.
Unfortunately, he has an umbilical hernia. Inspite the health provider assured me that umbilical hernias usually go away by themselves as babies grow I am still concerned about it
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10 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance
Good day to you.How are you? What's your weather like? Over here, it's quite warm although when it gets darker it becomes a bit cold.
I have tried to write to you several times, but as soon as I switch on my laptop my son demands that I pick him up. He likes to be held. He is in my arms all day long and adores to sleep with his tummy on my tummy and snuggles to on my chest. He is so demanding but at the same time he is very calm when he in my arms. He tends to get agitated as when I change his nappy or bathe him. He seldom rarely gets tearful or antsy. Sadly, he is still suffering from colic.
Unfortunately, he has an umbilical hernia. Inspite The health provider has assured me that umbilical hernias usually go away by themselves as babies grow. Despite this reassurance I am still concerned about it.
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10 sentences Can you correct my post please. Many thanks in advance
Good day to you.How are you? What's your weather like? Over here, it's quite warm; although, when it gets darker it becomes a bit cold.
I have tried to write to you several times, but as soon as I switch on my laptop my son demands that I pick him up. He likes to be held. He is in my arms all day long and adores to sleep with his tummy on my tummy and snuggles to on my chest. He is so demanding but at the same time he is very calm when he is in my arms. He tends to get agitated as I change his nappy or bathe him. He seldom gets tearful or antsy. Sadly, he is still suffering from colic.
Unfortunately, he has an umbilical hernia. Inspite of this, the health provider assured me that umbilical hernias usually go away by themselves as babies grow, but I am still concerned about it
This is really good! (and a good bit adorable). Hey I had colic too! turned out fine =D
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