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My favourite celebrity My favourite celebrity is Jasmine Thompson. I have been a fan for 1 year. I like her because she is so young . She is 15 years old.I have actually heard all of her songs. My favourite songs are "Adore" and "Ain't Nobody". Her song "Sun goes down" , which she sang with Robin Shulz took first place in the "Top 10" in countrys : England, Australia, Schvezaria,German . In 2015 her chanel on You Tube gained about 2 Millions subscribes. Her song "Ain't Nobody" took 32th place in UK "Top 100". After that she did remix " Ain't Nobody" and took 2th place in UK "Hit Parad", afterwords her remix was used in advertisment " Sunsbary". Now she works at company "All Music ".

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My favourite celebrity

My favourite celebrity is Jasmine Thompson. I have been a fan for 1 year. I like her because she is so young . Her She is 15 years old.I have actually hear heard (Время Present Perfect) all of her songs. My favourite songs are "Adore" and "Ain't Nobody". Her song "Sun goes down" , which she sing sang (Время Past Simple) with Robin Shulz took first place in the "Top 10" in countrys : England, Australia, Schvezaria,German. In 2015 her chanel on You Tube gained scored  (достаточно одного глагола) about 2 Millions viewers subscribers. (подписчиков). Her song "Ain't Nobody" took 32th place in UK "Top 100". After that she did remix " Ain't Nobody" and took 2th place in UK "Hit Parad", afterwords her remix was used (Страдательный залог) in advertisment " Sunsbary". Now she works (Время Present Simple) at company "All Music ".
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