Women's violence.  "Violence against women"

I am making  writing an essay about violence against women. A huge porcentage percentage of women have received  have suffered violence byfrom men (at least) once. This is a terrible note react but we can solve change it.

Now, at primary school, children learn how act in this these cases. Scientists think everyone can help someone by putting attention to their lifegiving them attention. 35%Thirty-five percent of women don't say anything and they think it will just be only happen once. "It wont happen again". The most waste used(?) argument excuse is "He was drunk and It was also my fault". Nobody must think it was your their fault if another onsomeone else hurts you them.

There are a lot of organisations helpingthat help the people in this causethese situations but the victim has to recognise the problem. FurthermoreEspecially if women have children are involved. Children act like sponges and they will replaycopy that bad situationbehaviour in the future.

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Well done!  I  think you shouldn't start a sentence with a number in digits...you should write it out in letters.

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Women's violence. Violence against Women 

I am writing an essay about violence against women. A huge percentage ( how many % )porcentage of women have suffered violence by men once. This is a terrible note horrific problem but we can solve it.

Now, at Currently, in primary school, children learn how to act in this these cases. Scientists think everyone can helt someone putting attention to their life (edit: I don't understand what you're trying to say here). 35% of women don't say anything and they think it will be a one-off occurence.The most waste awful(?) argument is "He was drunk and It also was my fault". Nobody must should think it is your their fault if another onperson hurt you hurts them. 

There are a lot of organisations helping the people in this cause affected by this- maybe can specify what 'this" is ~~, but the victim has to recognise  that violence against them shouldn't be accepted. Furthermore, if when women have children, Cchildren act like sponges and they will replay that bad situation in the future.>>> Hmm really? 

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Women's violence.

I am making an essay about violence against women. A huge percentage porcentage of women have received violence from by men once (edit: do you mean they have received violence *only* one time or *at least* one time? This would change your sentence). This is a terrible note problem but we can solve it.

Now, at primary school, children learn how to act in this these cases. Scientists think everyone can helt someone putting attention to their life (edit: I don't understand what you're trying to say here). 35% of women don't say anything and they think it will just be once only happen one time. "It wont happen again". The most waste awful (?)argument is "He was drunk and It also was my fault". Nobody must should think it is your their fault if another on person hurt you hurts them.

There are a lot of organisations helping the people in this cause affected by this, but the victim has to recognise the problem. Furthermore, if women have children, Cchildren act like sponges and they will replay that bad situation in the future.

Provide a good lifestyle to your child. of a good stylelife.

Good work!