A tour to the Shanghai Textile Museum(THANKS for correct it for me)
The Shanghai Textile Museum is not a big one, there are two floors for exhibition, the second floor is about the history of textile in Shanghai, where you can know how the ancient people make cloth and dress, there are also some exhibits including official custumes, buttons, small bags with spices which were used as decorations by ancient people on their belt.
what on the third floor exhibits the current textile technologies and materials.
what interests me most is the ancient textile machine, after gazing at them for a long time, it is still hard to understand how could it make silk into colth, that is amzing, how smart ancient people are!
The miniature model of Shanghai in around 1930 shows the fast development of this city.
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A tour to the Shanghai Textile Museum(THANKS for correct it for me)
The Shanghai Textile Museum is not a big one, museum. There are two floors for exhibitions. The second floor is about the history of textile in Shanghai. There you can know how the ancient people made cloths and dresses (or so you mean "made clothes and dressed" ?). There are also some exhibits including official costumes, buttons, and small bags with spices which were used as decorations by ancient people on their belts.What on the third floor exhibits are the current textile technologies and materials.
What interested me most were the ancient textile machines. After gazing looking at them for a long time, it is still hard to understand how it could it make silk into cloth. It that is amazing how smart ancient people are!
The miniature model of Shanghai in around 1930 shows the fast development of this city. (this sentence is not incorrect, however it doesn't flow with the paragraph. Place it in the middle, not at the end.)
That was very interesting and I had fun reading it! Next time, just remember to pay attention to punctuation marks. Although I can still understand the sentences without punctuations, they are still important :)
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