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Best wekeend ever Last month I went with my girlfriend to Tomorrowland Brazil. It was the best party which I've ever been, the atmosphere were fantastic, good music and many stages. Every single thing was perfect. I needed speak in a foreing language every time because people for all the world were there so I spoke in English and Spanish, more Spanish because the most of the strangers were from South America and Mexico. We could sleep just a few hours per night, around 4 or 5 although the party started at 1PM and ended 1 AM, because we were slept in a tent and at 7 O'Clock were very hot in the tent. We had really good time and made some new friends.

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Best weekend ever

Last month I went with my girlfriend to Tomorrowland Brazil. It was the best party to which I've ever been, the atmosphere was fantastic with good music and many stages. Every single thing was perfect.

I needed to speak in a foreign language every time because people from all over the world were there. I spoke in English and Spanish, more in Spanish because most of the strangers were from South America and Mexico.

We could sleep just a few hours per night, around 4 or 5, although the party started at 1PM and ended at 1 AM, because we were slept in a tent and at 7 O'Clock it was very hot in the tent.

We had really a good time and made some new friends.
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Best wekeend ever

Last month I went with my girlfriend to Tomorrowland Brazil (This is ok, stating "my girlfriend and I went to..." would be better and sound more natural). It was the best party which that I've ever been to. The atmosphere were was fantastic, good music and many stages. Every single thing Everything was perfect.

I needed to speak in a foreing foreign language every time because people for from all over the world were there, so I spoke in English and Spanish, more mostly Spanish because the most of the strangers were from South America and Mexico.

We could only sleep just for a few hours per night, around 4 or 5 although the party started at 1PM and ended 1 AM, because we were slept in a tent and at 7 O'Clock were very hot in the tent (it was very hot in the tent around 7pm) .

We had a really good time and made some new friends.

Sounds great, always wanted to go to tomorrowland with buds. 

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