5/14/2016
Rain thrummed on the zinc roof. The air was cooling, mother and I sat in the living room, looking outside the house. Through the open door, we were gazing up the grey sky and enamored of the sounds of the rain.
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5/14/2016
Rain thrummed on the zinc roof. The air was cooling, my mother and I sat in the living room, looking outside the house. Through the open door, we were gazing up at the grey sky and were enamored of at the sounds of the rain.0
5/14/2016
Rain thrummed (edit: I don't know what the word thrummed means, but it sounds cool and makes sense contextually!) on the zinc roof. The air was cooling, my mother and I sat in the living room, looking outside the house. Through the open door, we were gazing up at the grey sky and enamored by of the sounds of the rain.Good work! It's a very vivid beautiful scene you have written.
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5/14/2016
Rain thrummed on the zinc roof. The air was cooling, mother and I sat in the living room, looking outside the house. Through the open door, we were gazing up at the grey sky, and enamored by the sounds of the rain.Your English is perfect, I'm impressed! Well done.
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