Practice：It’s an invitation
Dear Jimmy ,
I'm going to hold a party next Saturday in my house.I hope that you can come to my party.If you like.Please come a little earlier and bring some music CDs.And I also prepare some snacks for you.I think we will have a good time.
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因为只是想练习写邀请函，所以省略了署名。
我想说“如果你愿意的话”不知道用“If you like”对不对。
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Practice：It’s an invitation
Dear Jimmy ,I'm going to hold a party next Saturday at my house and I hope that you can come to my party.If you like please come a little earlier and bring some music CDs. I will also prepare some snacks for you. I think we will have a good time.
Your friend,
Shine
因为只是想练习写邀请函，所以省略了署名。
我想说“如果你愿意的话”不知道用“If you like”对不对。
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Practice：It’s an invitation
Dear Jimmy,I'm going to hold a party next Saturday in at my house.I hope that you can come. If you like. [?] Please come a little earlyier and bring some music CDs. And I also prepare I have prepared some snacks for you. I think we will have a good time.
Yours,
Shisie
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我觉得用"if it's OK for you"更好
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After the period (.) and after the comma (,), you must put a space. But before the period or the comma, you do not put a space.
So, for example:
Dear Jimmy, [not Dear Jimmy ,]
in my house. I hope [not in my house.I hope]
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