My goal

Hi, since 4 months ago I decided tolose weight :D It is veeeery difficult because I don't have much time, but ok, without sacrifice there is no result. I miss junk food and rice. But Now I make more excercises more, I dance and be eating healthy... My English is advancing too. Saludos :)

myi goal

Hi, since 4 months ago I decided lose weight :D It is veeeery difficult because I don't have much time, but ok, without sacrifice no result, I miss junk food. But now I make more excercises more. I dance and be am eating healthy... my English is advancing too. Saludos :)

Nice job. Two things, I'm not sure what the "rice" word was for. I don't consider rice to be junk food. Also, "without sacrifice no result" is more of an expression. It is ok to say, but it is not a complete sentence. I just wanted to tell you the difference. Keep up the great work!

mi goal

Hi, since 4 months ago I decided lose weight :D is veeeery difficult because I don't have much time, but ok, without sacrifice no result, I miss junk food, rice. But now I make more excercises, I dance and be eating healthy... my English is advancing too. Saludos :)

My Goal

It has been 4 months since I decided that I would lose weight.  It is very difficult because I don't have a lot of time.  However, if I don't sacrifice something, I will never see a positive result.  I say that I miss junk food and rice but those are just excuses.  However, I dance and eat healthy and my English is improving too!

My Goal

Hi! Four months ago I decided to lose weight :D It is veeeery (very) difficult because I don't have much time. But ok, without sacrifice there is no result! I miss junk food and rice. But now I am doing more exercises, I dance and I am eating healthier... (My English is advancing too. Saludos :)

I used your words......with very few changes.

Just write out a number at the beginning of a sentence.....Four