My boyfriend
I'd like to tell you about my boyfriend.
My boyfriend name is Roger. He is 23 years old. He is from Cartago. He lives in Heredia. He is an accountant. He works in Telefonica CR. He is single. His favorite food is pizza. He has got two cats. His favorite celebration is New Year.
His parents live in Alajuelita. His mother is a housewife and her father is an unemployed. He has got 1 sister. His sister is a call center agent. He doesn’t have good communication with his family.
Roger always works from Monday to Friday. He starts work at 8 a.m. and finishes work at 6 p.m. He travels to work by car. On Fridays at night, he usually goes swimming with me. At the weekend he sometimes goes to the gym and he visits my house.
Roger loves playing guitar and playing videogames. He enjoys watching series and going out with friends. He hates cooking but he likes eating good food. He doesn’t like milk chocolate and alcoholic beverages.
My boyfriend is a fabulous person. I love his.
Regards,
Maria.
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My boyfriend
I'd like to tell you about my boyfriend.
My boyfriends name is Roger. He is 23 years old. He is from Cartago. He lives in Heredia. He is an accountant. He works in Telefonica CR. He is single. His favourite food is pizza. He has got two cats. His favourite celebration is New Year.
His parents live in Alajuelita. His mother is a housewife and her father is an unemployed. He has got 1 sister. His sister is a call center agent. He doesn’t have good communication with his family.
Roger always works from Monday to Friday. He starts work at 8 a.m. and finishes work at 6 p.m. He travels to work by car. On Fridays at night, he usually goes swimming with me. At the weekend he sometimes goes to the gym and he visits my house.
Roger loves playing guitar and playing videogames. He enjoys watching series and going out with friends. He hates cooking but he likes eating good food. He doesn’t like milk chocolate and alcoholic beverages.
My boyfriend is a fabulous person. I love him.
Regards,
Maria.
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My boyfriend
I'd like to tell you about my boyfriend.My boyfriend's name is Roger. He is 23 years old. He is from Cartago. He lives in Heredia. He is an accountant. He works in Telefonica CR. He is single. His favorite food is pizza. He has got two cats. His favorite celebration is New Year's.
His parents live in Alajuelita. His mother is a housewife and herhis father is an unemployed. He has got 1 sister. His sister is a call center agent. He doesn’t communicate well with his family.
Roger always works from Monday to Friday. He starts work at 8 a.m. and finishes work at 6 p.m. He travels to work by car. On Friday nights, he usually goes swimming with me. During the weekend/On weekends he sometimes goes to the gym and he visits my house.
Roger loves playing guitar and playing video games. He enjoys watching series and going out with friends. He hates cooking but he likes eating good food. He doesn’t like milk chocolate or alcoholic beverages.
My boyfriend is a fabulous person. I love him.
Regards,
Maria.
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Good job! Watch out for the gender of pronouns. A few notes:
I took out the second 'playing' because it would be implied that it applies to 'guitar' and 'video games.'
I changed 'and' to 'or' between 'chocolate and 'alcoholic beverages' because 'and' made it seem like he doesn't like milk chocolate and alcoholic beverages mixed together. And I agree, that sounds gross. :-)
Try to work on making more complex sentences by combining some of the shorter ones. For example: He is from Cartago and now lives in Heredia.
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