I read news report .
I read news report .
This new report is very interested .
I agree report of part
"perhaps we should focus on health and weight maintenance , not weight loss ."
I think too .
I think diet is long time keep going .
(at all life)
Listen to example ,
Diet trend of day 1 1 way meal is keep going one's lifetime
If eat nomal meal after weight loss success .
And returning to one's previous weight .
More get in weight ??
Think it was better with a healthy diet, if slowly
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I read the news report .
I read the news report .This news report is very interesting
I agree with this part of the report
"perhaps we should focus on health and weight maintenance , not weight loss ."
I think so too .
I think a diet should last a long time .
(through all of life)
Listen to this example ,
Diet trend of day 1 1 way meal is keep going one's lifetime ( I am not sure what you wanted to say in this sentence)
If a person eats normal meal after weight loss success ( I'm not sure here either but success alone cannot end this sentence.)
And returning to one's previous weight .
More get in weight ??
Think it was better with a healthy diet, if slowly ( I'm not sure what you want to say in these last two sentences.)
Overall I think you english is good and will improve if you keep practising.
Have a nice day.
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